Comments | renegadewriter8: [FIC] First Time

renegadewriter8

[FIC] First Time

Oct 16, 2011 00:16

Title: First Time (305 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types, Transformers Generation One
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Sunstreaker/Ratchet/Sideswipe
Characters: Sunstreaker, Ratchet, Sideswipe
Additional Tags: Drabble
Author's Note:
- Written for the twins_x_ratch ( Read more... )

rating: teen, genre: romance, character: ratchet, status: complete, challenge, pairing: sunstreaker/ratchet/sideswipe, community: twins_x_ratch, 'writing: fanfiction, type: challenge response, 'fandom: transformers, type: drabbles, type: prompt fill, character: sunstreaker, character: sideswipe, world: g1, 2011, relationship: slash

Comments 13

velvet_infinity October 16 2011, 06:15:40 UTC

I liked this alot XD

Reminds me of the series I'm writing right now ^^ And you're right! It DIDN'T become a multi-chapter fic!! Lucky you TT^TT

renegadewriter8 October 16 2011, 15:59:43 UTC

HAHAHA My 'oneshot' plots tend to breed a lot. It's why I have so many unfinished fics... T.T Most started as oneshots but noooooooo bunnies would not leave it be!! *flails unhappily*

I'm glad you liked this!!

velvet_infinity October 16 2011, 21:41:03 UTC

I know what you mean... All the oneshots in my Day By Day oneshot series have the potential to be multichaptered. And I fight the bunnies everyday. It's why HiWtHi isn't updated yet.

renegadewriter8 October 17 2011, 04:19:10 UTC

You just made me remember! UPDAAAAAAAAAATE! Protective twins MAX!! XD

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cmdrtekk October 16 2011, 07:00:53 UTC

This may be short, but is is very well done.

Nice job. Thank you for sharing.

renegadewriter8 October 16 2011, 16:00:00 UTC

^.^Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

darkeyes_17 October 16 2011, 09:04:48 UTC

Short, sweet, and just all round wonderful. Congrats for that ;)

renegadewriter8 October 16 2011, 16:13:27 UTC

^.^ Glad you liked it! I almost didn't have time to write at all! T.T

Thanks for reviewing!

ryagelle October 16 2011, 15:24:09 UTC

Very sweet, and nicely done XD

renegadewriter8 October 16 2011, 16:13:49 UTC

teehee thanks!

sideslip_tf October 17 2011, 03:12:46 UTC

That was really sweet. It may have been short but I think it may have captured the spirit better than a longer story would have (if that makes any sense). Really liked the build up of events from the first meeting to the first kiss to when they merged their sparks. Very nice.

renegadewriter8 October 17 2011, 04:16:33 UTC

^.^ Thanks! I'm glad something readable came out of this! Really, I had just come home from being out all day, with a migraine, and 'this close' to passing out where I stood. But I REFUSED to for down without a post for this week's challenge! XD So... I'm happy it turned out alright! XP

Thanks for the review!!