Twin Robots, Robots Walk With Me - The Seventh Confusion, Dying Dee

Sep 04, 2009 19:30

ok, this is my crappy attempt, at...well...you'll see when you read it. but i think ive failed....badly.
anyway, enjoyy  (:


"hang on...who's that?" one of the security guards asked looking at the screen that showed Dee lead on the hard, hospital matress, with a tear running across her nose. With an evil looking man stood behind her.

"I dont know, m-maybe she's not mental after all..." another admitted.

"We should get her out of ther-" before he could finish, he looked at the screen once more, and both of them ran as fast as they could to Dee's cell.

"please..." Dee whimpered to Bob.
He replied by grinning and placing a hand on Dee's back. But simply his touch sent a sharp wave of pain going up her back.

She gasped and snapped her eyes tightly shut.

The security guards and several doctors rushed into the room.

"Where is he?!" one of the security guards asked.

Dee's breathing stopped being an even pattern.

"Shit!" exclaimed one of the doctors, as he walked beind Dee to look at her back.

The next hour wasnt full for Dee. She'd be in...then out...then in...then out...

"Dee!!!!" whimpered Sue at one point. "Dee...please dont do this...im so sorry..." she cried, holding Dee's hand, and kissing it.

At another point, doctors came in and checked on Dee. Checking her blood, mumbling something to one another, then walking out sighing.

The last point, was between her and Noel.

"Dee...I'm so sorry...but..." he sighed, well, tried to, but he was crying too, so it was more of a shaky sigh. "...Dee please dont do this to us...we need you...we need you so much!!! What'll happen to Robots?! And...ohgod..." he errupted with tears.

"...n-noel..." she said.

He looked up at her.

"I...I can't...I can't do this anymore..." she admitted, her body filling with sharp pain, but she didnt care, she needed to tell him.

"Dee, please! Just hold on! The doctors can-"

"no..." she interrupted. "they walked out shaking their h-heads..."

"Dee, please!!!" he whimpered.

"no Noel...i cant...i cant hold on...it hurts too much..." Tears began to fall from her eyes.

"Dee!!! dont do this to us!!!" He cried.

"i...im sorry..." she said, trying to sit up, but failing.

Noel leant down and hugged her tightly, but as he pulled back up, she whispered something into his ear.

He watched her, for the next hour. Just sat there. Watching her give up the fight between her and Bob. He'd won. He'd ruined the once so tough Dee Plume. He'd destroyed Noel's love. And destroyed most of Sue during the process.

Bob

Sue burst into the room, and looked at Noel, staring at Dee.

"no..." she whispered.

Noel turned and looked at her.

"noel....no..."

He looked into Sue's eyes.

"but-...i-...i mean-...." Tears started falling from Sue's eyes, as Noel stood up and hugged her tightly, crying too.

They both broke apart, and looked at their broken robot. She'd once been strong, hyper, energetic. but now she was weak. now, she was gone...

looked through the window, as Dee lost the fight. He smiled to himself and faded away.

sue denim, dee plume, noel fielding, dr's

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