FIC- Alone in Some Queer Sunless Place, R/S, Complete

[pigeongirl99]

TITLE- Alone in Some Queer Sunless Place
PAIRING- Remus/Sirius
RATING- 15ish
SUMMARY- Remus, the first war, 'He stood alone in some queer sunless place/Where Armageddon ends.'
DISCLAIMER- J K Rowling owns the world, characters, and plot. Siegfried Sassoon owns the titles and gets all credit for inspiration. He also gets my love.

Comments

[elucidate_this]

this is lovely. it made me cry.

[pigeongirl99]

Thank you, that's a wonderful complement for a writer.

[anonymous]

wow I loved this so much, it was done so well! You made me feel so sad (a good thing don't worry), poor poor Remus. Poor, poor everyone.

[pigeongirl99]

Yes, poor Remus and everybody!

So glad you liked, thanks so very much for saying so.

[luinecu]

Beautiful: Some very good lines there, all lovley, especially the end, you had me stomarch-clenched and watery eyes by the time it was finished. Well done.

I found the brackets tended to make me loose my train of thought, just to mention.

[pigeongirl99]

I know the brackets can be a bit hard to follow and not everyone likes them, but as yet I haven't found another way to structure my writing in this style. I am sorry if it put you off at all though.

Thanks for saying you liked it anyway.

[pigeongirl99]

Wow. Thanks.

[txilar]

God but this is gorgeous. I really like your style, it's like a story made of poetry. =) And I didn't even know it was of a set until I clicked your journal! Aigh. Now I get to read them all. *obliviatesself*

[pigeongirl99]

Thanks so much for the lovely words, I'm chuffed to bits you liked it that much.

Afraid on my journal it's just this fic split up and posted as I wrote each of the tiny little sections.