Landed part IV

[starla_kid]

Title: Landed Part III
Pairings: Remus/Sirius
Rating: Still G but angstier than i'd expected.
Disclaimer: I'm not sure this makes any difference saying this, but unfortunately - not mine.
Summary: Lie Low At Lupins era. Well. The angst continues. I'm quite a jolly person really. Honest. 
Thanks so much for your comments everyone - especially paulamcg

Comments

[brighty18]

Oh!! How awful!! You REALLY have to continue this before you make me start to worry even more!

On to other things... as usual, this was VERY well done. you do a great job crafting both characters emotionally and they are both so sympathetic. My guess is that Sirius really wanted to come on his own but was too nervous, frightened, unsure of himself, etc. or at least I hope. The looking at his feet thing kinda clued me into that.

The owl post and letters were nicely done, btw.

[starla_kid]

Yes I am cruel aren't I? I don't think I meant to be so mean to them when I started this. Sorry!

Thank you for your compliments. You know this is a great morale booster writing wise for me. Always had a hang up about it.

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[quartetship]

OMG! I was all into it... and then...Remus started crying and..I WANNA KNOW WHY! *cries too* ~lol~

The letter from Arthur is well done, and I like the interaction between Sirius and Remus. Lovely like always, but now I'm reeeeally into it, so you simply MUST keep going! <3

[starla_kid]

I know, poor Remus hey. And the lengths I go to to get in the mood to write this stuff. I even learned to play and sing a miserable country song that i heard on a fanvid about remus once so as i'd be able to make him gloomy for this chapter.
i'll keep going. trying to get this finished before nano kicks off.
thanks for the comments by the way!
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[starla_kid]

thank you very much. fab. heeee.

come and have a group hug with me and forest_rose. We're trying to make them feel better but my naughty fingers keep typing them into angst. dear me. what's to do!

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[ekaterin24]

Oh, my, your angst is just perfect. And your storyline is not predictable (I love originality!) So many good touches, like Sirius-as-Padfoot on the comfy bed, and Remus upset over the thought that
Sirius came to him only because he was told to--when Sirius asks if he can stay as if he's worried that Remus doesn't want him, doesn't want the risk or Sirius' presence for his own sake (at least as I interpret it...)

Another wonderful chapter. I'll watch for the next one!

[starla_kid]

thank you. i can't stop smiling at all your lovely comments. really. this is the first fanfic i've written and i'm blown away by all the support.
makes me wonder if it's called fanfic because you get fans for writing it!

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[forest_rose]

Ohhhh! *melts* I am loving this so much - your style is lovely, so restrained and heartbreaking. *shoves Sirius back at you and snuggles Remus instead*

It's not very often that I read a fic where I just want to leap into the story and interact with the characters - in this case, knocking some sense into the pair of them and then snuggling them to death! I'm really looking forward to the next installment....

[starla_kid]

i'm afraid my friend that remus is on short term loan because everyone knows he lives with me. it was my neice's birthday yesterday and, although remus couldn't make it, he sent her a bar of chocolate all neatly wrapped a la remus with a note written with a genuine quill and ink. sirius added his name too because we all know that he's too lazy to buy his own gifts and that, apparently 'moony, you choose better presents.' you see. they live with me. ME!

either that - or I have too much time on my hands. a frequent criticism.

thank you so much for your comments though. it's fuel to the fire.

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[starla_kid]

well wadya know! fancy another coincidence?

i live in derbyshire.

[disby]

hey...sorry to disturb but can you please link me to the pic your icon is inspired by, thanks!!!