Overchay with Me- Chapter Three

[lupinsmoon12391]

Chapter One: Life in My Closet
Chapter Two: Let's Go, Just You and Me

Chapter Title: Chapter Three: Pretend You Never Even Knew Me
Rating: Still safe, but it will get delicious in chapter five, I promise!
Warning: -looks around- Two boys...Holding hands....Kissing...Groping...And then Lily interferes, damn her.
Summary: After my  Waiting a Long Time

Comments

[carmine_ink]

This is a really fun read. :) Looking forward to more!

[kawaii_tenshi27]

Is this where I make childish puns on the word 'odd'? Because I kind of want to. I won't, but I'm just saying... ::winks::

Lovely, as always!

Silly Lily, getting all upset about Manny and not understanding why, but still crushing on Remus.

[ekaterin24]

Great! This is such fun! I love Sirius embarrassing Remus (and Remus throwing himself on Sirius--no subconscious motive there, eh, Remus?) and then Sirius' description of his alleged betrothed. I just kept giggling more and more. Oh, and did I mention how much I enjoyed the snogging and the grope?

Also, I thought this was a neat metaphorical phrase: "The river of spenders just made their way around the stagnant teenagers" Very creative!

Can't wait for September!!

[jazzonia]

*glomps you for the update*

Sirius, not known for taking his romantic endeavors too solemnly, wasn't planning on being with anyone else while he was with him.

How odd, he thought.

Aww, Rem, you're worth it! So very marauder!

[quipped]

Yay, update!
I thought this was a very good chapter. Poor James, Lily doesn't know she cares about him yet.
*hugs James*