Fic: Satisfying Their Curiosity 2/4

[remuslives23]

Title: Satisfying Their Curiosity
Author: remuslives23
Story Rating: NC17
Prompt: potterprompts 28: I love you, and lover100 005: Discovery
Summary: Over-indulgence at Lily and James' wedding leads to Remus inadvertently revealing a secret he'd been keeping from Sirius. Sirius takes advantage of the revelation to explore a long-held fascination for the werewolf.
Notes/Warnings:

Comments

[isisanubis]

I....just.....and it......gah.

This was so lovely. So, so, so, so many moments, and lines, and feelings I want to point out that I liked, that I think I'd have to copy and paste most of this here to get it all. I kinda love stories where they're silly, self-denying, foolish boys - it makes them seem more like real people ('cause how many people get the charmed relationship they're sometimes given?). This chapter, it's worth waiting for the sex for. It's build-up, but it's more then that. I've told you time and again how much I love how you portray these boys, but it's more then that, too. It's like it's not a story, like it's a memoir or something. Really fantastic.

Sometimes, I want to create new words to praise the stuff I read here.

[remuslives23]

*hugs*

I'm so glad you liked it! These are some of my older fics and I haven't reworked them as much as I'd like so I'm glad they aren't too bad. :)

I adore your comments! *throws you down and smooches you*

[isisanubis]

Well, I'm not gonna type a paragraph of pure praise for something I don't like. I'm curious, since this is so lovely, and works so well, what did you want to tweak about it?

I adore your fic, so even trade.
Thank you for aiming for the soft ground.

[remuslives23]

Probably just tighten it a bit in places, get a bit further into what they're thinking. Sigh. I'm never able to see past the mistakes and things I would have done differently. I am so pleased you enjoyed it. :)

[mysecretashes]

There will be sex now, yes? *gives you hopeful look* It's always better sober, anyway. :D

[remuslives23]

Sex soon. Promise. :)

*hugs you*

[feelsthemagic]

I was going to comment to chapter 1 but when i got to the end, i had to keep reading. And even now, I have to keep reading, but alas, the time has not yet come for me...
this is amazing! cant wait till they give up and just shag already

[remuslives23]

More soon! And sex as well after those two horrid cliffies. Thanks for reading. :)

[ramie_k]

*melts* Yes, there is a difference.

So sweet and boys! I love the puppies going slowly and figuring things out. Can't wait for the smexytimes!

[remuslives23]

Sexing coming up! Promise! :)

*hugs you*

Thanks for reading.

[ladyannikaa]

//flails So love this!!!

'And I don't want to fuck you. I want to make love to you. I want to be the one to show you that there's a difference.'

Sweet Merlin! That's so beautiful it makes my heart ache!!

[remuslives23]

*hugs you and your aching heart*

I'm so glad you liked it. I almost took it out. :) Thanks, hon!