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Fic: To Kiss First

Aug 10, 2009 08:01

Title: To Kiss First
Author: remuslives23
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 840
Summary: "There is no greater act of courage than being the one who kisses first." Janeane Garafalo
Notes: Written for the Day 7 prompt at dogdaysofsummer. Also potterprompts #22 'First Kiss', and lover100 prompt #040 'Heat'

( To Kiss First )

dogdaysofsummer, sirius/remus

Comments 56

camillily August 9 2009, 22:37:46 UTC

This was lovely ♥

dogsunderfoot August 9 2009, 23:38:32 UTC

Can I jump in real quick to say I love that icon? And my son (the cat lover in the family) sat here and giggled at it for a couple of minutes!

camillily August 10 2009, 13:06:04 UTC

Aw, that is so sweet! :D

remuslives23 August 10 2009, 02:31:29 UTC

Thank you, hon! I'm happy you liked it. :) *hands out first comment cookies*

And your icon is adorable!

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frauleinslash August 9 2009, 22:45:13 UTC

Aww, so sweet :) I love the mental image the spine-touching brings up, and I also love the way you wrote James and Remus. Fab as usual ^^

remuslives23 August 10 2009, 02:35:41 UTC

Thanks, sweetie! *hugs* I'm so happy you enjoyed it. :)

remusjacy August 9 2009, 22:45:37 UTC

Loved it!

remuslives23 August 10 2009, 02:36:30 UTC

Hiya, hon! *hugs* Thanks for reading! I'm thrilled you liked it. :)

werewolfsfan August 9 2009, 23:00:19 UTC

There had been a time when Sirius had doubted he was capable of truly loving someone, had thought it impossible that someone as damaged as himself would ever fall so completelymadlyterrifyingly in love with another person, but Remus had proved him wrong. Remus with his sardonic sense of humour, his never-failing loyalty and uncommon kindness. Remus with his flaws and his own broken soul had claimed Sirius' battle-scarred heart as his own....

That's why I always ship them together but of course, I could never express anything as lovely as this fic!

remuslives23 August 10 2009, 02:39:15 UTC

*hugs you* Thanks so much, hon! I'm so pleased you liked it and gosh, getting quotes back in comments just never loses its thrill. :)

phoenix_on_ice August 9 2009, 23:06:10 UTC

oh this was so sweet. I love how you write these two.
And James and Peter at the end was just perfect. Like they didn't quite know what to think, so they distract themselves with food. :D

remuslives23 August 10 2009, 02:40:18 UTC

I can imagine that first moment of discovering them together and the typical boy response... distract themselves with food so they can ignore it. :)

Thanks for reading, hon! *hugs*