Fic for the 10 Hurt/Comfort challenge: Confession

Feb 07, 2009 16:53


Here's number 1 for the 10 Hurt/Comfort table.

Title: Easier Said than Done
Author: remorsful_rain
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own nothing except the story line
Prompt: Confession
Summary: He was crazy that had to be it. That could be the only reason he was standing in front of Lt. Colonel John Sheppard and all his oozing, handsome glory.

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mcshep, 10 hurt/comfort, fic

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pimped_klingon February 11 2009, 01:50:49 UTC
dudedudedude love this. You have the personalities down wonderfully! <3 ^3^

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remorsful_rain February 11 2009, 02:15:13 UTC
I'm glad you did!!! I wasn't totally sure I explained Rodney well enough at the begining, but I just love the ending. hehe. Thanks for letting me know what you think!! I appreciate it and keep checking back I have nine mor to go. i'm hoping to have the next one done soon, like by the beginning of next week. Is that soon?? anywho thanks again!!! <3 <3

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pimped_klingon February 12 2009, 02:48:40 UTC
:3

I loved the ending too! It's totally them, and I could practically hear them speaking, it fit so well.

Oh yay! I'm so excited!

<3

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horusguard76 February 11 2009, 04:54:18 UTC
...and Sheppard still hasn't said 'yes'.

Poor Rodney, probably has to approach him all over again to ask for a date and then again for a confirmation and then for the place ... because let's be honest here - those two? They'll be too distracted by bickering and kissing to ever make it out of the room. (which is kinda necessary to go on a date. :) )

Great piece - very much in character and fun! :)

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remorsful_rain February 11 2009, 12:45:03 UTC
When I was writing it I wsa thinking that the fact that they kis and the line “Well I didn’t and I won’t." Sheppard was refering to sayign no to Rodney asking him out. But I do see you point and the whole having to re-approach John would make a good sequel, maybe for the next table I do. And I agree they'd deffinantly be to distracted to go anywhere. :P I'm glad you liked it!! And It Was In Character!!! I had some trouble with Confidence of Tomorrow, but I'm improving!!! And that's an... Well improvement. XP
Thanks for the comment!!!!! Keep checking back for more!!

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horusguard76 February 11 2009, 13:22:56 UTC
Yeah, I got that alright. (good Sheppard!) Still, I think our bosy Rodney might just want to hear it said out loud since he already made such an effort and all. ;)

Of course, I did! Those two are one of the best pairing I have ever met in any fandom and so far I have only encountered great fanfiction for them. (thank god!)

Will do. :)

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remorsful_rain February 11 2009, 22:13:55 UTC
I understand your comment before a little better now, and I just niticed how many misspellings there are in my reply... O.o I never thought about it like that. You're right Rodney wouldn't just leave it there. I'm definantly going to have to do a sequel!

And do you mind if I friend you?? I thin kyou know how I came across your name. :P And I'm glad to see I'm not the only Yaoi fan out there. (of course I'm sure there are millions of us...)And I'm curious how did you find the story? Was it on mckay_sheppard?

P.S. I like your icon!!

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