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isiscolo October 21 2009, 12:08:47 UTC
Hee! I'd completely forgotten about the original drabble I'd written! You did a great job of keeping the same kind of tone.

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amaresu October 27 2009, 16:18:59 UTC
Thank you.

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gloriana October 21 2009, 19:44:04 UTC
Oh, that's so sweet :) :) I had missed isiscolo's first fic, so it was a pleasure just to read that; but I loved this point of view, even though it's incredibly anonymous, with the 2nd person pov. And I can just see the way Fraser would be looking at the shopkeeper, bashful and yet expecting the person to mend their ways :)

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amaresu October 27 2009, 16:20:29 UTC
Thank you.

And I can just see the way Fraser would be looking at the shopkeeper, bashful and yet expecting the person to mend their ways :)

He'd be terribly embarrassed about it all, but completely expecting the vendor to get with the program once everything had been explained. Very awkward for everyone involved.

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keerawa October 22 2009, 02:34:35 UTC
Still, it was better than when the cop partner came round instead and told you how horrible you were for cheating a wolf out of his money, like it was stealing candy from a baby or something.
*laughs* I can just picture Vecchio doing this! Pulling the badge, using that combination of bluster, unenforceable threats, and 'what-the-hell-is-wrong with you' attitude.

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amaresu October 27 2009, 16:21:33 UTC
And Dief would play it up too. Acting like the poor innocent soul that had been taken advantage of while Vecchio asked the person to explain how they could possibly do something horrible to him.

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malnpudl October 22 2009, 03:00:27 UTC
I ♥ you like crazy for this.

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amaresu October 27 2009, 16:21:41 UTC
Thank you.

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amaresu October 27 2009, 16:21:56 UTC
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

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