Harry Potter: Paragon

[remixabot]

Original Fic: Reputation, by verus_janus/ janus
Remix: Paragon [Snape, 100 Words, Rated G] by lye_tea

Comments

[sophinisba]

I like the repetitions in this, the way the movement of the words is like what you say about his eyes and what you hint about his mental state.

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[lilian_cho]

Love the cadence and the alliteration. And the juxtaposition of series of words.

Snip, snip, Snape, they ruthlessly twisted words (the Dark Lord laughed shrilly, Snape was as good as dead!).

And you go and play with words and their sounds and meaning, yay!

[methleigh]

Thank you very much for this remix! I too like the alliteration and use of words. You portray his nervousness uniquely and well. Very nice indeed.