Numb3rs: Ten Words

[remixabot]

Original Fic: Day Has Gone Down, by izhilzha
Remix: Ten Words [Larry Fleinhardt (Larry/Megan), 100 Words, Rated G] by jestana

Comments

[izhilzha]

Awww. I love that you chose this fic to remix, and that you chose the ten unwritten words to center it on. They're simple, but all Larry needs to reconnect with Megan in this moment. :)

(I really like, too, that Larry is feeling just as abandoned/lonely in his way as Megan is from her side of the story. That feels exactly right to me.)

Thank you!

[jestana]

When I was going through your fics, this was the one that really struck me, but it took me a while to figure out what to write. Then those ten words struck me and I had to focus on them and how they affected Larry.

(They're happiest together and I refuse to let TPTB ruin it for me! :P )

You're very welcome!

[melissima]

Oh Larry! He's such a sensitive guy. :D

Your foray into this universe of izhilzha's is so brief, yet it's wistfulness complements the heartbroken mood of the original fic.

[jestana]

Yes, he is! W00t!

Thank you very much. I'm glad you think it suited the original fic very well. That's part of the fun of remixing.

[melissima]

It really is. I'm hooked now! (I missed the deadline to sign up for remixredux09 because I was afraid to sign up while working on these.)

Hmmm...maybe I should make an N3 remix comm...