Protective Urges (The Girl, You'll Be a Woman Soon Remix) [Firefly; Mal/Kaylee; PG-13]

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Title: Protective Urges (The Girl, You'll Be a Woman Soon Remix)
Author: meinterrupted
Summary: Mal had always been there to protect his Kaylee, and he always would be.
Fandom: Firefly/Serenity
Pairing: Mal/Kaylee
Rating: General adult; PG-13
Disclaimer: Joss is god, I am but a mere worshiper.
Spoilers: "Out of Gas"; Serenity
Original story: Protective Urges by

Comments

[bluflamingo]

This is really cool - I didn't write it imagining that Mal had feelings for Kaylee, it's fun to see it from a new point of view. And the decision at the end is really effective, poor Mal.

[meinterrupted]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it wasn't exactly how you pictured it. But isn't that the best thing about Remix? :D

[bluflamingo]

But isn't that the best thing about Remix?

Absolutely! I love seeing this whole other story that wasn't there before, if that makes sense; makes me look at the original differently as well, which is really cool. Thank you!

[dswdiane]

Both the original story and this remix are just delightful. I didn't suspect Mal had feeling for Kaylee in the original, except those of a watchful big brother.

But you did an excellent job of presenting an alternative POV. Nicely done.

[meinterrupted]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[escritoireazul]

This is really lovely, especially the end, and River's counsel, and Mal's decision. Thank you so much for writing this story.

[meinterrupted]

Thank you for your feedback. I enjoyed writing it. :)

[such_heights]

Oh, this is very, very lovely. *sigh* Mal.

[meinterrupted]

Thank you so much! :)

[xenacryst]

Ohh, Mal. And so very much them, all of them.

[meinterrupted]

Thank you. I'm glad it rings true.