Breathe On, Sister (They Pass Me By remix) [Supernatural; Victor Henricksen; PG-13]

[dr_who_dre]

Title: Breathe On, Sister (They Pass Me By remix)
Author: wanttobeatree
Summary: Victor is nothing if not really goddamn good at his job, but there are days when he feels like the picture he’s making just doesn’t match the one he got on the box.
Fandom: Supernatural
Character: Victor Henricksen
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: It’s all Kripke’s, and none of it’s

Comments

[vee_fic]

Ha! Oh, I'm pleased with this one. It's exactly the sort of thing I would expect from a remix: taking that one line at the end and spinning it into a whole new story that builds off the original. I like how you gave everyone names, too; and in the middle of it all, poor Henricksen and his frustrated searching.

Good work!

[azephirin]

I really liked this! I loved the original, and this is an extra-deluxe-tasty spin on it. Andrew Duvant is great (good thing he never saw the car, indeed!), and I have a certain amount of adoration for the anonymous teenaged boy and his insistence that Sam and Dean biked away from the scene. (I can't help thinking that Dean would be offended at the implication.) Great work!

[cofax7]

Oh, that is excellent. Nice job, indeed.

[sasha_davidovna]

I really enjoyed this. It has a great Victor voice, and I liked the OCs as well, especially Duvant and the teenage boy. When the reveal is done, I wonder if you would consider reposting to copsandhunters?

[bofoddity]

This was really good! I love all the people standing up for the Winchesters, Andrew Duvant especially, and Henricksen's frustration and determination are true to character.