Title: Acceptable Risk (the Slow Build Remix)
Author:
darsyniaSummary: It was April when they kissed the first time.
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Spoilers/Warnings: vague season two spoilers // slash
Original story info:
First Monday, by
flyakate (
Acceptable Risk (the Slow Build Remix) )
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Great! You did a wonderful awesome job!
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Thank you very much!
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IT was *gorgeous*. It really was. This is everything a remix is--seriously, you and kassrachel raised the bar on this one--taking the original and fingerprinting it into something that relates to the first but stands on its own. I kept this open *days* reading it over and over, because it just struck me as *so good*. Both characters getting comfortable in a relationship, both characters discovering more and more about each other, the dialogue was *fucking perfect*, the dogtags--I could spend years on teh hotness, and you turned it into an actual plot point and gave it meaning--God. How have I missed your fic before this? MUST MAKE NOTE TO READ EVERYTHING YOU HAVE WRITTEN.
In short, thank you for writing something so *good* and complete.
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