She Bangs the Drums (Losing, Losing, Lost Remix) (Doctor Who; Ten, Lucy, the Master; PG-13)

[dangermars]

Title: She Bangs the Drums (Losing, Losing, Lost Remix)
Author: netgirl_y2k
Summary: Lucy's tragedy is that she loves him.
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Tenth Doctor, Lucy Saxon, the Master.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Doctor Who is the property of the BBC
Original Story: Losing by aralias
Notes: Takes place during and after the events of The Last of the Time

Comments

[aralias]

this is brilliant :)

i love lucy's quietly derranged point of view, and her detachedness, particularly after the death of sarah jane. i also think lucy's relationship with the doctor is perfectly portrayed here, which is great because i didn't even glance at it in mine and its so interesting and awful. bizarrely, my favourite part is the doctor washing the teacups for her, and the need to be civilized even though they obviously hate each other.

also, you know, this line: But she's long since accepted what she is to Harry; the pretty, damaged consort that's the must have accessory for planetary dictators this season just because its great, though i think the semi colon should perhaps be a colon.

basically, thank you for writing something so good.

[beatrice_otter]

Brilliant! Your Lucy is the character we saw on the screen, but given dimension and reality.

[resolute]

Very nicely done, and I have to agree with the comment above, that this shows Lucy's deranged world view with compassion with certain implacable march towards doom. Nicely done, thank you --

[paranoidangel42]

Lucy's really interesting in this, and I like the relationship she has with the Doctor.