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minnow1212 April 22 2007, 15:17:08 UTC
Very sweet! I liked this a lot, especially this line:

>But it made Fraser itchy and anxious, without someone to chase down. It made Ray feel the need to chase him down.

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wildestranger April 22 2007, 16:05:13 UTC
Awww. This is lovely. ;)

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ximeria April 22 2007, 22:21:28 UTC
This was all kinds of good *g*

Especially the way Fraser takes the chance in the end, asking for something he hopes he can have.

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ekaterinn April 23 2007, 02:19:08 UTC
Oh. *sighs happily* I love what you've done here, how you've taken my basic little fic and somehow deepened it. This made my heart clench:

It made Ray feel the need to chase him down. Problem was, Fraser was right there all along.

And this made me grin:

"I'm not going anywhere," Fraser said again against Ray's mouth.

"I know, Fraser," Ray said, kissing him again and again. "I know."

I'm in awe of your Ray voice, which is exactly right and I love how Ray's the wise one here, showing Fraser how to navigate the heart's reasons and wants with the ease of long experience. Thank you so much!

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lastscorpion April 24 2007, 03:48:22 UTC
I loved the way you made the whole thing sound like it was in RayK's voice! I loved the way you did Dief, too. Great story!

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