Comments | remix_redux: Twinkie Run (The Stars & Garters Remix) [X-men, Hank McCoy, Bobby Drake, Others, PG]

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Twinkie Run (The Stars & Garters Remix) [X-men, Hank McCoy, Bobby Drake, Others, PG]

Apr 14, 2007 18:27

Title: Twinkie Run (The Stars and Garters Remix)
Author: likeadeuce, AKA Karabair
Summary: Junk food is banned from Xavier's School for the Gifted. Hank McCoy, a new member of the faculty, decides to bend the rules for the sake of his students. Meanwhile, fellow new teacher Emma Frost creates her own set of problems for Scott Summers.
Rating: PG
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character: hank mccoy, rating: pg, remix author: likeadeuce, character: emma frost, character: kitty pryde, character: scott summers, original author: escritoireazul, character: bobby drake, fandom: x-men movieverse, fandom: x-men

Comments 51

selenak April 22 2007, 17:33:10 UTC

Love it - Hank's narration, the friendship between him and Emma, the developing relationship between Emma and Scott - and of course the twinkies!

Twinkie Run -- likeadeuce April 29 2007, 19:45:16 UTC

I'm going to have to give in and buy some of those damn things this week, and I don't even like them. I don't know if, being European, you've had the privilege, but they're sort of like semi-edible sponges, with creme-y sugar inside. Anyway. . . Hank insists on rhapsodizing about them, in my head and I'm going to end up with a craving.

I'm glad you liked this -- I thought you'd enjoy the Hank & Emma scene, particularly.

roguewords April 22 2007, 19:26:07 UTC

HEEE.

This is great! Hank and Twinkies and the beginnings of Scott/Emma, yay!

Twinkie Run -- likeadeuce April 29 2007, 19:46:01 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

renata_kedavra April 22 2007, 21:57:00 UTC

Ahh, glorious! Hanks' voice was perfect (and hysterical), and I love his concern for the students.

Oh, and I love that Emma didn't know how Twinkies work.

Twinkie Run -- likeadeuce April 29 2007, 19:46:53 UTC

Oh, and I love that Emma didn't know how Twinkies work.

Yes, they're not really in her realm of experience. . .

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

oyceter April 23 2007, 02:24:12 UTC

Oh that's so cute! I love the slow movement toward healing that the original has and this one takes up in the spades, and I love Hank's narrative voice.

Twinkie Run -- likeadeuce April 29 2007, 19:48:09 UTC

Thanks! His voice was fun to play with, and I'm glad that the underlying tone came across, even though it's mostly a light-hearted story.

st_aurafina April 23 2007, 05:44:16 UTC

Henry is wonderful as the narrator here. I love that his office is a haven for the kids to come and talk, I love his friendship with Emma, and the way he gently teases Scott. And a Tony Stark cameo! Made of awesome.

likeadeuce April 29 2007, 19:49:46 UTC

I'm so glad you liked Henry! I was nervous about writing him, especially in first person, and I'm glad the voice came across. And I couldn't resist slipping Tony in there.

Thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you liked it.