Fic: Perfectly Simple (Flashback Bridge Mix) [Naruto; Uchiha Sasuke/Uzumaki Naruto; R]

[lex_zeppelin]

Title: Perfectly Simple (Flashback Bridge Mix)
Author: karotsamused
Summary: This is the way a shinobi loves. Sasuke learns Naruto in the forest. Zabuza arc.
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke/Uzumaki Naruto
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Kishimoto Masashi, not me.
Original story: Perfectly Simple by ununoriginal
Notes: Thanks to my betas for the support and

Comments

[mousapelli]

oh, i love! Fic about rivals shoving at each other just pings me in all the right ways. I love that Sasuke sort of wants to help a little, but all he does is shout and make things worse, except for the part where that sort of does make Naruto feel better after all.

Also, i really enjoyed the jab about Sasuke being totally aware of Sakura's crush on him, since she thinks she's so stealthy about it. Great remix!

*loves*

[ununoriginal]

1st off, thanks so so SO much for writing such a wonderful remix of the fic. sasunaru is one of my most fav pairings and i really enjoyed how u drew out nuances in their r/ship and interaction that would not have occurred to me. the subtlety of sasuke's feelings was also beautiful. i loved the way the fic started, i loved the way it ended, and everything was gorgeous in betwn :) *hugz*

Re: *loves*

[ununoriginal]

lolz! totally agree with u on tat :) and i never tire of discovering all the myriad facets of sasunaru - go remixes!