Five (The What Exactly--? Remix) [Bleach, Ishigo/Ishida, PG-13]

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Title: Five (The What Exactly--? Remix)
Author: aviss
Summary: The step from sex friends to lovers is always a hard one to take.
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Ichigo/Ishida
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to Kubo Tite
Original story: Five by shayheyred
Notes: Thanks to my wonderful beta, moshesque, and to duare for the useful imput.

Comments

[shayheyred]

What a lovely take on my story! You've mined the depths of Uryuu's thoughts and emotions beautifully, and made him a very real teenaged boy. Thanks so much for writing this -- I couldn't be more delighted, and I look forward to finding out your real name, so I can thank you properly.

[aviss]

Thanks, I´m glad you liked it, it was really interesting to do this an your fic was really challenging.

[shayheyred]

Thanks again! I really enjoyed your remix of "Five." It's apparent you get the relationship between these two; your take on them was insightful and well-written.

[mousapelli]

I liked this very much! I love how disgruntled Ishida is about the whole thing, and how he doesn't really mean for things to come out like they do when he talks, but it isn't like he's going to take them back.

Terrific remix!

[aviss]

Thanks, yes Ishida never ihntends for things to end up the way they do... but not complaining either *g*