Dedicated to: PAXWOLF

Dec 27, 2007 11:32

Title: Trouble, part II
Author: booknerd_miss
Beta: me, so please forgive me cause I suck at grammar
Rating: PG (but may go up if I continue anymore)
Pairing: Remus/Harry
Summary: Harry Potter was in trouble. And not just any kind of trouble. Harry Potter had fallen in love . . . with Remus Lupin. (The Trouble of Falling in Love with Remus Lupin)
Read more... )

Leave a comment

paxwolf December 29 2007, 22:33:52 UTC
(I realized your link went to your own page AND here, so I'm posting my comment in both places! Hope you don't mind!)

Ooooh, 'Lyss, this is just SO excellent! I adore this series so far! Truly, really, deeply. :-) Thank you so much!

I was so surprised to see you had written a second part to the story you'd begun this week, and so quickly too! (wow, a second birthday fic! Wow!) And I'm absolutely delighted (and flattered) you have done so. (and dedicated it to ME??!!??)

It really gives a huge sense of beautiful HOPE to the story that the first part (and I) was very much longing for, and gives hope to poor Remus, and to poor Harry too. Which is something I really, really LOVE!!! :-) Awwwww!!

It's so sweet and funny and charming, Lyss, and it's fantastic to see the very neat complement of 'Facts' from Harry's POV to the ones listed previously by Remus. I can't tell you how good it was to read that Harry felt the same way about Remus! (yes!)

Ooooh, 'Lyss, this is just SO excellent! I adore this series so far! Truly, really, deeply. :-) Thank you so much!

I was so surprised to see you had written a second part to the story you'd begun this week, and so quickly too! (wow, a second birthday fic! Wow!) And I'm absolutely delighted (and flattered) you have done so. (and dedicated it to ME??!!??)

It really gives a huge sense of beautiful HOPE to the story that the first part (and I) was very much longing for, and gives hope to poor Remus, and to poor Harry too. Which is something I really, really LOVE!!! :-) Awwwww!!

It's so sweet and funny and charming, Lyss, and it's fantastic to see the very neat complement of 'Facts' from Harry's POV to the ones listed previously by Remus. I can't tell you how good it was to read that Harry felt the same way about Remus! (yes!)

(Oh, by the way, just in case you wanted to know, the word 'yea' is actually spelled with an 'h' at the end, as in 'yeah'. Just a little unimportant, niggly little thing. (If it's 'yea', it's sort of an old-fashioned, biblical-type kind of term, like "Yea, and he smiteth the werewolves and other dark beasts until they falleth under the heel of the shining saviour" sort of kind of thing. heh.)

Harry and Remus' story seems fraught with great potential, with a incredible amount of both future joy, and the hint of future tragedy that simply wrings at my heartstrings. *hugs both of them tightly* *hugs Lyss for good measure*

What a true joy and pleasure it was to read this, and you simply MUST continue it, and somehow get these two together for a happy ending - or at least a bit of happiness for both these characters before the inevitable death that it looks like poor, dear, sweet Remus must one day endure. (and poor, dear, sweet Harry must also endure, in a different and no less painful way, I expect.) Keep up the hope, and keep up the stellar work! (and whatever style works best for YOU will work just fine for the rest of the story!)

And thank you again, my friend, so very much! I really look forward to more!

Pax, Pleased Birthday Wolf :-)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up