New Story
Title: Moonfoot
Author: Me, booknerd_miss
Rating: PG - PG-13
Summary: Harry finds an old box filled with his memories of his parents and it leads him to confess the feelings he has for a certain someone.
Pairing: Remus/Harry
Beta: None, so excuse mistakes
Notes: Ok, well, I don't know how you guys are going to feel about this considering that all my ( Read more... )
I really liked the characterizations of all the cast here, how cool Hermione was, how likeable Harry was, how tender and wonderful Remus was. :-)
And I agree with the above comment, "And how being with each other would cause the Earth to fly off its axis and bring the apocalypse" was hilarious! LOL! You certainly covered all the basics with all the reasons that Remus would give to protest Harry's advances, though it was sweet that in the end they just don't care about all of those obstacles in order to be together. Awwww.
And I liked your flashback too - the Marauders and Lily and baby Harry - it's so lovely and warm, that the tragedy of what happened to them all really sinks home. It's hopeful to think that Harry and Remus at least, might etch out a bit of happiness.
Don't take it to heart if ff.net isn't all that great a place to post your stories! There's a lot of folks who read there but don't comment, or who might say less than kind things. (believe me, I know.) I don't know if you got my email or not, but it is good to 'see' you again. Was this story written for the Mortal Moon fest by chance? Either way, you did a great job!
Now, how is more of "Pensieve" coming? *nudge nudge*
Keep up the great work, and thanks for helping keep Harry/Remus alive and kicking! This pair is just too sweet for words.
Pax :-)
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Yes, I did get your email and I'm so sorry that I haven't responded yet but I have my finals coming up so things have just been bang head on table stressul right now, ya know? But I will for sure write back to you by probably the end of this week since then I shall be on winter break! YES!
I'm so happy that you liked the story! As you know I always freak out about characterterization in my stories so I'm glad that you think I did well with that. And I'm glad that you liked that line too! It was just something tht came into my head after about a billion hours of studying for a supid astronomy test, ya know? But yea, I was trying to make it sweet and stuff because . . .well, I have no clue why but I just wanted a sweet and dorky story.
And yay about the flashback! Another thing that I was worried about even though I liked it but you know that you never know how other people are going to react to something that you like. This actually wasn't written for the mortal moon challenge; I didn't have the time to tke part in it, sadly and actually I don't know what happened with it because no one turned in any entries even though people signed off, so maybe it was post-poned which hopefully means I can still join in! This story was just random!
Sadly nothing is coming one Pensieve . . . I think the idea mill for that story has dried up never to be seen again it looks like. Right now I'm probably just going to concentrate on the seven plus stories that I have in the process right now before making a new chapter for Pensieve, even though I really like it.
Thanks again for reviewing and I promise to write back to you email soon!
~b_m
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