shortshort story

[relucatantblond]

We have to turn in a shortshort story for lit....there's supposed to be figurative language, symbolism, etc...tell me what you think

Comments

[phrogg]

how about... "Her Finest Hour"? Adds a bit of irony to it all...heh...

good story...kinda reminds me of something i started scrawling a number of years ago...never got around to finishing it, though, since i had most of it spread among a few different sheets of looseleaf...which have since gone their seperate ways...

[phrogg]

i'd also like to see this expanded on...probably before this point...so that your readers can have some background as to why Thayre was such a fool, and what happened to turn the "amicable swordswoman" into the ravager we see ever so briefly before her demise...

[relucatantblond]

i might do that. This started out as a solo, and this was a dream. I might continue it in that form. this, perhaps with a bit of re-working (i'm going to take it in on tuesday to go over it with the prof) is just for class.

[hufflepuffer83]

I liked it. And I like the title suggestion given by phrogg.