College Writing Stuff
Quick recap...a poem written in the form of a Gahzal. Second is a brief short story. Comments and input=hooray.
A breath of fresh air you are to me my beauty.
I knew you would care, only my sweet beauty.
The love we share, it remains lost in time.
Those who pass by just stare, admiring you my beauty.
I'm lost in the glare, the shimmer of your eyes.
But life's not fair my sweet beauty.
I'll say a prayer as I wait for you.
In a deeper layer, I find you my beauty.
We are a pair, although we are not the same.
Oh what a scare, where did you go my sweet beauty?
And I shall repair the pieces of your broken heart.
So climb each stair, you will make it my beauty.
So wait for me there, for I am on my way.
For no one shall compare, with you my sweet beauty.
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For the record, I have not checked for errors in the story.
Everyone is so quick to judge my actions and label me unjustly. Due to my lengthy list of male companions, you say I am a sleaze and a whore to society. I ask you to take a closer look. My friends and family all wonder how I can afford a place such as this, and the reason is I'm really quite lucky. Many of my male companions with whom I socialize like to buy things for me, is that so bad?
This has allowed me to not have to spend my money. These guys are always so nice to me. It's fun being social, having a good time and partying til the early hours. I figure why not, I only live once anyways.
My family thinks I should get settled down and get married. What for? I've been with married men, and listened to the hard times of their relationships. I think it's a gift that men are able to confide in me. Besides, it's not like I'm lonely. It seems like I'm with a different guy almost every night.
Since I happened to have a pocket that was full of cash, I decided to go for a walk to the nearby movie store to pick up a new release. As I made my way, people passing by in cars and on foot always seemed to look my way. It is such an odd feeling to have all this unwanted attention.
As I pushed open the door at the Movie Pot near my home, I headed towards the new release section located along the back wall. The section to the left of where I was stood the adult film section door with a sign that read "You Must Be 18 To Enter."
Inside the room I heard two younger boys scrummaging through, chatting about how hot these women were, and the things they wanted to do with them. I find it so absolutely revolting that these women portray themselves in such a promiscuous fashion. Their line of work is so raunchy, dirty and repulsive that it makes me sick to my stomach, yet they seem able to somehow embrace it.
As the boys chatted away, I decided to rent Cheaper by the Dozen 2. As I waited in line, my phone began to ring. Apparently someone wants to keep me company tonight.
A breath of fresh air you are to me my beauty.
I knew you would care, only my sweet beauty.
The love we share, it remains lost in time.
Those who pass by just stare, admiring you my beauty.
I'm lost in the glare, the shimmer of your eyes.
But life's not fair my sweet beauty.
I'll say a prayer as I wait for you.
In a deeper layer, I find you my beauty.
We are a pair, although we are not the same.
Oh what a scare, where did you go my sweet beauty?
And I shall repair the pieces of your broken heart.
So climb each stair, you will make it my beauty.
So wait for me there, for I am on my way.
For no one shall compare, with you my sweet beauty.
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For the record, I have not checked for errors in the story.
Everyone is so quick to judge my actions and label me unjustly. Due to my lengthy list of male companions, you say I am a sleaze and a whore to society. I ask you to take a closer look. My friends and family all wonder how I can afford a place such as this, and the reason is I'm really quite lucky. Many of my male companions with whom I socialize like to buy things for me, is that so bad?
This has allowed me to not have to spend my money. These guys are always so nice to me. It's fun being social, having a good time and partying til the early hours. I figure why not, I only live once anyways.
My family thinks I should get settled down and get married. What for? I've been with married men, and listened to the hard times of their relationships. I think it's a gift that men are able to confide in me. Besides, it's not like I'm lonely. It seems like I'm with a different guy almost every night.
Since I happened to have a pocket that was full of cash, I decided to go for a walk to the nearby movie store to pick up a new release. As I made my way, people passing by in cars and on foot always seemed to look my way. It is such an odd feeling to have all this unwanted attention.
As I pushed open the door at the Movie Pot near my home, I headed towards the new release section located along the back wall. The section to the left of where I was stood the adult film section door with a sign that read "You Must Be 18 To Enter."
Inside the room I heard two younger boys scrummaging through, chatting about how hot these women were, and the things they wanted to do with them. I find it so absolutely revolting that these women portray themselves in such a promiscuous fashion. Their line of work is so raunchy, dirty and repulsive that it makes me sick to my stomach, yet they seem able to somehow embrace it.
As the boys chatted away, I decided to rent Cheaper by the Dozen 2. As I waited in line, my phone began to ring. Apparently someone wants to keep me company tonight.