Holiday (Challenge 150 - Speeding Bullet)
Title: Holiday
Rose/Nine | G | No Spoilers
Challenge 150: Speeding Bullet
A/N: It's not likely to be clearer to anyone else than it is to me how this came from that particular challenge. Ah, well.
EDIT: Thanks raedyn_l for the very excellent comments - which lead to this rewrite, about which I feel yonks better.
X-posted to dw100
Rose slammed the door and glared at the Doctor.
"To be fair," he said, brushing snow from her shoulders, "that is Bali. It just happens to be in the middle of an ice age."
Sighing, she removed her sunglasses. "Never mind. It was too much to hope for a beach holiday anyhow."
"Says who?" He smacked a button on the console. The TARDIS roared, shuddered, and fell still again. He strode to the door and flung it wide.
"Voilá!" he said.
Rose blinked in the blinding sunshine.
The Doctor held up her sunglasses. “Need these?” he asked with a grin.
Rose/Nine | G | No Spoilers
Challenge 150: Speeding Bullet
A/N: It's not likely to be clearer to anyone else than it is to me how this came from that particular challenge. Ah, well.
EDIT: Thanks raedyn_l for the very excellent comments - which lead to this rewrite, about which I feel yonks better.
X-posted to dw100
Rose slammed the door and glared at the Doctor.
"To be fair," he said, brushing snow from her shoulders, "that is Bali. It just happens to be in the middle of an ice age."
Sighing, she removed her sunglasses. "Never mind. It was too much to hope for a beach holiday anyhow."
"Says who?" He smacked a button on the console. The TARDIS roared, shuddered, and fell still again. He strode to the door and flung it wide.
"Voilá!" he said.
Rose blinked in the blinding sunshine.
The Doctor held up her sunglasses. “Need these?” he asked with a grin.