Revision RequestreimsadminApril 25 2011, 22:23:02 UTC
After reading over and discussing your application, we would like a few revisions. They are as follows:
-The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample.
* Provide a stand-alone sample of something the character would post on the Intranet that others would respond to. Please make this sample approximately 7-10 sentences long.
* You may set up a thread with another character in reimsapplicants or another musebox and link the completed sample in the application. Please note that a linked sample must still be representative of how they will communicate online. With this option, we require a minimum of 10 individual comments from the
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Re: Revision RequestseasonofjusticeApril 25 2011, 22:29:11 UTC
Good afternoon Reims Academy, I hope you are all enjoying the new network system and the ease in which it allows you to communicate with each other as well as your teachers.
With the new system I would like to take this chance to remind everyone that we that faculty are here for your needs. And if you are ever having a problem you may come to us. Your counselor is there for you and will do what they can to help you. Even if you think your problem or question is a small one please do not hesitate in coming to us. No question is too small to be asked.
For all of my students I am always available in my office during school hours as well as after. IF you need to get a hold of me during other times you may send me a message on the network and I will make sure to reply as soon as possible.
Application Accepted!reimsadminApril 26 2011, 05:14:10 UTC
Congratulations! Your application has been accepted. Please respond with your character's journal name. Once you've completed that, please join reimsacademy, reimsactivities, reimsassembly and, optionally, reimsantics.
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-The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample.
* Provide a stand-alone sample of something the character would post on the Intranet that others would respond to. Please make this sample approximately 7-10 sentences long.
* You may set up a thread with another character in reimsapplicants or another musebox and link the completed sample in the application. Please note that a linked sample must still be representative of how they will communicate online. With this option, we require a minimum of 10 individual comments from the ( ... )
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With the new system I would like to take this chance to remind everyone that we that faculty are here for your needs. And if you are ever having a problem you may come to us. Your counselor is there for you and will do what they can to help you. Even if you think your problem or question is a small one please do not hesitate in coming to us. No question is too small to be asked.
For all of my students I am always available in my office during school hours as well as after. IF you need to get a hold of me during other times you may send me a message on the network and I will make sure to reply as soon as possible.
Thank you, and have a good day.
Eiki Shiki, Counselor.
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Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to role-playing with you!
Position: Guidance Counselor (High School)
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