Application Accepted!reimsadminApril 26 2011, 04:47:32 UTC
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Revision Request reimsadminApril 25 2011, 21:12:03 UTC
After reading over and discussing your application, we would like a few revisions. They are as follows:
-We would like to see the personality section expanded a bit. It focuses heavily on Aya and Hatate's views toward journalism and touches very little on her personality outside of those two driving forces. Please give us a bit more on the other aspects of her personality that don't pertain to either Aya or journalism. This is a minor request, so there's no need to overhaul the personality section. Just add on a bit more.
Please have your revisions submitted within one week from this notice. Should you have any questions or need clarification, please contact us.
Revision QuestiongoogledthatApril 25 2011, 23:16:16 UTC
Should I edit the entry itself or should I add a comment to the entry with the revisions? Or does it not matter to you guys? I just wanted to see if you had a preference either way.
Revision RequestreimsadminApril 25 2011, 21:20:02 UTC
After reading over and discussing your application, we would like a few revisions. They are as follows:
-The AU History is hard to follow and makes reference to characters of whom the relationship to Beatrice isn't defined. For example, who are Krauss and Natsuhi and how did they become involved with the children? We would like you to tighten this section of the application down, clarifying it, as if the mod team has no knowledge of the canon itself.
-The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample
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Application Accepted!reimsadminApril 27 2011, 17:37:21 UTC
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Application Accepted!reimsadminApril 26 2011, 04:48:28 UTC
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Application Accepted!reimsadminApril 26 2011, 04:48:47 UTC
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Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to role-playing with you!
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-We would like to see the personality section expanded a bit. It focuses heavily on Aya and Hatate's views toward journalism and touches very little on her personality outside of those two driving forces. Please give us a bit more on the other aspects of her personality that don't pertain to either Aya or journalism. This is a minor request, so there's no need to overhaul the personality section. Just add on a bit more.
Please have your revisions submitted within one week from this notice. Should you have any questions or need clarification, please contact us.
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-The AU History is hard to follow and makes reference to characters of whom the relationship to Beatrice isn't defined. For example, who are Krauss and Natsuhi and how did they become involved with the children? We would like you to tighten this section of the application down, clarifying it, as if the mod team has no knowledge of the canon itself.
-The Intranet/First Person sample is 'first person action spam' and not an example of how the character would communicate online. Please redo this sample so it represents what the application instructions say. We have included below the instructions for the Intranet/First Person Sample:
INTRANET/1ST PERSON SAMPLE: (This is a sample of how the character talks and interacts with others on the school's intranet. There are two options available for this sample ( ... )
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Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to role-playing with you!
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Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to role-playing with you!
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Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to role-playing with you!
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Hiccup's journal is growingupviking!
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