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Ten Turns to Trust (Brian/Justin; NC-17)

Aug 04, 2007 02:15

Title: Ten Turns to Trust
Author: Etharei
Timeline: Early S2 and late S4
Rating: NC-17, to be safe
Warning: very mild canon angst
Beta:This fic has not been blessed by a beta, so I apologize for all remaining mistakes.
Disclaimer: Queer as Folk and all the characters and situations featured therein are the property of Showtime, Cowlip Productions ( Read more... )

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Comments 25

theguernica August 3 2007, 20:56:03 UTC

This was very well written. Your attention to detail is fantastic. I like the way you write Brian and Justin. It's so honest and raw.
Thanks for sharing. :)

volvenord August 3 2007, 21:55:04 UTC

Wonderful Etharei. It is so much Justin and Brian as I perceive them, it's like getting added time with them beside the show.

You write so evocative, in character, poetic and nitty gritty daily life. I love it. You are the best.
Valkyrie

etharei August 11 2007, 15:15:55 UTC

Thanks so much, Valkyrie! I'm very happy you found this believable; I always try my best to get as close to canon as possible. I also greatly appreciate you taking the time to say such nice things about my fics :-) I hope you'll continue to like my work!

etharei August 11 2007, 15:13:37 UTC

Thank you very much ♥ I like to pay attention to detail, so it makes me happy that you could pick up on that. The character voices in my head have a great deal of control over how I write, and Brian!muse refuses anything that doesn't feel honest to his character.

I'm glad you enjoyed this!

esamovol August 3 2007, 21:20:29 UTC

OK I am a crying melted puddle on the floor.

You are brilliant!
Thank you.

etharei August 11 2007, 15:16:48 UTC

*HUGS* :-)

You're the sweetest. Thanks very much, am thrilled you liked it ♥

kari77 August 3 2007, 22:17:03 UTC

THIS is so brilliant! To see both incidents connected like that and the obvious love they have for each other, in good and bad times, through health and illness ... just makes me sigh.

I loved this entire amazing piece of writing. But it's been the sheer beauty of the prologue that actually floored me.

Thank you so much for sharing it. :-)

etharei August 11 2007, 15:19:23 UTC

Thank you so much =D I personally feel that the strength of the B/J relationship is at its clearest when one of them has to take care of the other. Plus it makes sense that their actions would speak louder than their words. I'm so happy that you enjoyed this!

lunachickk August 3 2007, 22:33:55 UTC

This was beautiful. I loved the way it bounced from S2 to S4. Just beautiful.

etharei August 11 2007, 15:21:11 UTC

To be honest I hadn't originally intended to have this switching between time periods, but I couldn't decide on which storyline to focus the fic on =D I'm glad you liked this, thanks so much ♥

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etharei August 11 2007, 15:24:55 UTC

Thanks so much! I hadn't planned on the constant switching between time periods, but when I couldn't decide on which storyline to focus on I ended up writing both, then discovered there were parallels between them. I think that part of the healing process is the realization that there would be a future afterwards, so I wanted to insert a hint of that, and in the Brian bit you're referring to I actually had the 510 scene at Babylon in mind :-)

Glad you enjoyed this, and I really appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback.