Fic: witchy women of the west (SPN, Dean/OFC, NC-17, 2/3)

[regala_electra]

witchy women of the west
Part Two: Rose
Fandom: SPN
Author: Regala Electra
Pairing: Dean/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Pre-Series
Summary: He asks her the million dollar Glinda question and she takes a moment to contemplate her smoldering cigarillo. “The question isn’t are you a good witch or bad witch? It’s if I’m a good woman or a bad woman

Comments

[manzanas_verdes]

So, so good. Felt how it dragged and sunk, sort of like her accent/speech in a way, that *Rose* it was; like she was a part of every syllable, soaking the whole story with her presence.

Gotta love a character that can get that under the skin of the one "telling" the story.

[regala_electra]

Rose as a character kinda made me nervous as I didn't want to do a disservice to her. When I'd originally worked up the story, her line of dialogue about it mattering if she's a good woman or a bad woman, that was always my, um, summary for the entire story. And I was afraid that people wouldn't feel her or enjoy reading about her, so thank you so much for the feedback.

[vinylroad]

GOD.

I just. I'll come back and leave proper feedback when it's not 6am and my brain isn't blown to bit by this.

It is beautiful.

[regala_electra]

Oh Kat. I hope I do get to bend your ear about this story, I'm so honestly pleased that you found it to be beautiful. Wow.

[hiyacynth]

If I had any self control at all, I'd be able to do the smart thing and not read your stories right before I have to go to work. It's just not the optimal time for sexy stories this good. But I have no self control, and so I tend to get to work in something of a state and end up having ... inappropriate thoughts... throughout my work day. It's distracting, yes, but a lot more interesting that my job :-)

Anyway, rambling here. What I meant to say is I love these stories. I love how complete a world you create around your OFCs in such a relatively small space. Plus, there are always wonderful insights into the Winchesters and smokin' hot smut. Perfect!

Thanks!

[regala_electra]

Heh, imagine having your brain go into porn-overload at work! I think my dirtiest stories have been imagined at work. Um, that probably says something terrifying about me.

Thank you so much for the feedback! This particular series was my real first attempt at OFC het, it's gone over many many edits and sort of became, er, an obsession of mine, creating a world where these "witches" could exist that felt like it belonged to the SPN world.

[zelost_mind]

Man. What thoughtful, rich, fantastic things you create. Every time.

This is gorgeous, thanks again for sharing. ♥

[regala_electra]

I don't mind sharing, babe. Sharing is caring after all.

My insane drive to wallop people with details once again leeches into my storytelling. One day I'll relearn to be sparse but today is not that day.

[workswithwords]

I actually squealed a little when I saw that this was posted...

I am seriously in love with both of these women you have written, they are perhaps some of the best OFCs I have read in a long time. And Dean...oh Dean...You've written him so well.

Her nose bumps into his when she angles up to kiss him, best thank you he’s ever gonna get, one he didn’t even have to force out, she starts it and damn, only way he can respond is to thank her, kissing her back, tongue flicking out as their mouths open wider. I think that kissing is so often forgotten or overlooked in fiction, and you've seriously brought it back in just one sentence.

/fangirling

*hugs*

[regala_electra]

Kissing is important! No matter how many times I cheat with "tongue-fuck" as a descriptive term, I am entranced with the intimacy of a real nice kiss. Yeah.

A year of developing these OFCs, I mean, they have stories for their pasts and futures that I simply haven't written, up here (*points to brain*), I think that made them detailed. And I sort of researched their respective cultures a lot. Er, I mean, Maria's cultural background was easy, I'm half Puerto-Rican and a lot of her comments on growing up being hispanic in America are gleaned from personal accounts. I was fortunate in having met the poet whose work inspired Rose's development as a character, so I knew how I'd want Rose to "sound" and how to get her accent as close to genuine as possible, even there, Rose doesn't speak with the full on creole accent, it's a hybrid, as befitting someone living in the modern age, even with her roots so firmly in the past.

And that is a lot of information!

Eeep.

So thank you for the feedback!