Fic: the butcher, the baker, the candlestick maker (SPN, NC-17, Het/Threesome) (2/3)

[regala_electra]

the butcher, the baker, the candlestick maker
a sex trilogy
Author: Regala Electra
Rating: NC-17 (Very Adult)
Warnings: Extremely Graphic Sex (so not kidding), Language
Spoilers: S2, All Hell Breaks Loose (for part 3), this part is Pre-Series
Pairings: Dean/OFC, Sam/OFC, Dean/Sam/OFC
Word Count: 4,200
Summary: The butcher, the baker, the

Comments

[leighm]

Reading this makes me want to compare Dean and Sam when really I can't. They are so distinctly different in the way they approach sex and the way they react to women.

Your Dean is so dirty and I am all over that but this? damn, I could never resist Sam. Not that I could resist either of them but IT'S SAM. God, I'm making no sense.

He's timid and not quite where he should be with his sexuality, still so young. But then there are these moments in this piece where it's like perfection. Like one minute he's trying to figure her out. He would want to do EXACTLY what she wanted. He likes taking care of who he's with. The lines where he asks her and then in the next breath commanding her. *dies*

He wanted to keep her to himself, stupid possessive thought, he knows, but to have her separate from this other life, it makes him feel like Sam, even if he's obscuring, blurring the who-what-why of him.

This is the Sam I know. I crush so hard on this and him. I can't even begin to tell you:)

I'm amazed.

[regala_electra]

Oh dude. Man. You see.

Sam kills me. To write him. Because Dean is weirdly natural for me, I just get into this Dean zone, can breeze by, I know Dean thinks he's being straightforward, but he's evasive, only in this transparent way, so fucked up beyond belief, but he's, um, visceral. I can "hear" Dean in my head.

Sam? Not so much, but I press on, I knew this would be the hardest thing to do, to follow up the insane raunchy smut of butcher with baker, where Sam's 16, and you know, the fallout with his family is coming up in a year or so. He has to read as a Sam who hasn't yet learned to embrace what is, for all that entails, and he's 16, so he's not going to be the kinky freakmaster I totally think he is (secretly).

Heh, Kat heard me bitching about this allll night. I kind of found myself saved by the OFC, Lydia, who I'd already kind of backstoried as a bit of a wild child, very chill and she could counteract Sam's hesitance.

Really, I'm so pleased that you found I captured Sam, I stress over writing him to the best of my ability.

[zelost_mind]

Oh god. I have so much love for this. Dean winding him up and all those little details, that way you write like a stream of thoughts.

And the porn. Fuck. I am drowning in porn tonight and it's the most exquisite way to die. ;)

So much love.

[regala_electra]

I write like a stream of thoughts because my brain is broken. Oh brain. I remember when you worked normal-esque.

Porn is Very Serious. Sam feels very strongly about it.

*loves you back*

[caithream]

*CLAPPY HANDSSSS*

This is HOT, woman. HOT.

[regala_electra]

GAH. Your icon is hot.

Thank you, darling! I am quite pleased you enjoyed.

[sloane_m]

You've captured Sam so well at this age. Just the right amount of hesitancy and command. And the sex. It was all just so needy and wanting and perfect.

He’s not going to let anyone ruin what he has, not Dad or Dean, most of all, he’s going to stay out of his own way.

For some reason that line just kills me.

[regala_electra]

Thank you so much for the feedback. I struggle a lot with writing Sam POV because I think he puts a lot more out there emotionally and he's more giving of that, in a way that Dean isn't (Dean's got a lot of going on, but he's evasive about that, has to have his walls) and it's hard to keep him being a guy without taking it to this crazy emo level.

I'm truly delighted that you loved that line, writing it, I wanted it to be this big punch of an Oh, Sam moment, because he'd think that, I believe, and it needed to sort of set up why he's keeping his distance, not because of his father or Dean, but out of fear that he's the one who will ruin it in the end.

Thank you.

[sloane_m]

Well I think you've managed to balance Sam just right in this. He doesn't come across as a chick in a bloke's body like he does in some fics. He's just a guy, a teenage guy with all the insecurities that come with that. And yeah, that line managed to convey so much in just one short sentence.

Hey, mind if I friend you?

[regala_electra]

Please, friend away.

I try my best to make male characters still seem like guys, I think that's where I have the disconnect with Sam, I fear about going over the line and making him not as guy-like as he should be. So I breathe a sigh of relief that you read this and see Guy Sam.

[a2zmom]

I love the underlying sweetness and tentativeness here. I wonder if the brief glimpses of a normal life - sex with a hot girl who likes you - makes it even harder for Sam, knowing that it's all going to have to be given up.

[regala_electra]

Thank you for the feedback.

I wonder that myself and I sort of left it up in the air. The thing with Sam, is that when I write him before/after what we see of him on the show, I have Jessica on the mind, I think of where she fits in, which is possibly unfair, but it makes me think of how to get him to the Big Fight with Dad, if a part of it isn't because Sam doesn't just long for exposure into the normal world, but because he's already been tempted by perfect normal life, knows the shape of it, even if he can't ignore what else lurks in the dark, he still wants to be nothing more than a Guy and lead a safe, comfortable life, just being Sam and not Hunter Sam or Son of a Hunter or however else he imagines his life when it relates to the supernatural world.