Fic: El Viaje Misterioso de los Hermanos Winchester (SPN, Gen, R, 2/4)

[regala_electra]

El Viaje Misterioso de los Hermanos Winchester
(The Mysterious Voyage of the Winchester Brothers)
Spoilers: S2, Set after Playthings
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Content, Language
Word Count: 32,500
Summary and Story Notes can be found back in part one

part one can be found here

Part Two: Some Dude Called Máximo Gómez and Other Unusual

Comments

[iamstealthyone]

Dude, I want to drink Dean’s café con leche. Love that stuff. (Though I’d put too much sugar in it for Dean’s liking.)

Yikes, that drowning sequence with Cheryl made me feel like I couldn’t breathe. Great writing -- very intense.

Favorite lines:

“You think it’s a serial killer? Any leads?”

God, the people the government hires. They’re all whacked out of their skulls.

“It’s a shame about her family,” Dean says, letting an undercurrent of watch your fucking mouth fly loose.

I adore Dean doing that. That woman was highly annoying. *high-fives him*

Nervous eyes, the color’s more like a tree trunk slicked with rainwater, a kind of wet brown that’s unsettling

Good description.

Another thing to put on his to-do list and with their luck, they’ll wind up working the next job someplace cold and the heater will go on the fritz. He pats the dash of his car, comforting her, as though she can read his mind.

*g*

A bitter laugh, the kind that could strip a spring flower of its early petals

Great description.

His mouth is rum-soaked,