The Jean Genie
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Set sometime after NightshifterSummary: Wherein Sam Winchester gets magical powers (and a spiffy new earring) thanks to an accursed blue plate special and Dean has to break the curse. Featuring wishes for pigtails, declarations of Dean’s awesomeness, the best beer in the world
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Thank you.
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Man, Sam’s hair is a scary, scary thing, it’s like, sticking up all over and looks like it’s plotting to take over the world.
It is. It really, really is. One day we shall all have to bow down before the wrath of Sam's hair.
Also, I loved the Dean!puzzle, and Dean being tired of the emo-moments, and, of course, the enchanted kimono. This whole story was awesome, but for whatever reason you really hit it out of the park at the end, for the entire section once Sam's powers go away.
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This whole story was awesome, but for whatever reason you really hit it out of the park at the end, for the entire section once Sam's powers go away.
Cool. It does get a bit heavier emotions-wise, with Sam realizing that Dean wasn't as terrible to him as he could've been. I did have to stomp out the chick-flick moment urge and I'm very proud of the Dean-puzzle notion in the story, it shows how aware Dean is of his little brother's thought process.
And then they have a pillow fight which, I imagine to be really hysterical because I bet those two take it seriously.
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Re-reading, I think what struck me was that you were able to acknowledge and portray those heavier emotions without losing the quirky/comical tone of the story -- better, you were able to portray those heavier emotions through the comical tone. And the pillow fight :D
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Hah. I totally wrote in the pillow fight when I realized I was drifting off to angstville. Quick, I need to keep this funny! A-ha, pillow fight! Boys fighting on beds makes everything better.
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Whee! Gracias! Giggles are good!
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Thanks for the feedback. *does victory arms as well*
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This was awesome. I think I giggled through the whole damn thing.
hehehehehe.
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