Comments | regala_electra: Fic: Darwinism, or How Gently the Crocodile Feasts (SPN, Gen, PG)

regala_electra

Fic: Darwinism, or How Gently the Crocodile Feasts (SPN, Gen, PG)

Mar 21, 2007 18:58

Today is pheebs1's birthday. She is awesome. That's really all I have to say. No, wait, I have more. She's really awesome. She'll listen to me vent and ramble and her polls are made of win.

Happy birthday, hon.

Darwinism, or How Gently the Crocodile Feasts
Author: Regala Electra
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Reference to Tall TalesSummary: It’s not food anymore ( Read more... )

spn fic, fic

Comments 19

a2zmom March 21 2007, 23:36:52 UTC

I love the metaphor of Dean as crocodile. You're really been on a tear the last few days.

regala_electra March 22 2007, 01:31:59 UTC

Thanks babe. I'm not sure if it comes across, but this was supposed to be Sam's POV, him just harping on Dean's appetite, but it turned into something else.

I have no idea where this jaunt of fic-writing has come from. I'm just trying not to let it die.

a2zmom March 22 2007, 02:20:40 UTC

It was completely obvious to me that it was Sam's pov. So, it worked for me.

regala_electra March 22 2007, 02:28:18 UTC

Heh, you know me. I overthink these things. I was concerned I lost the funny when I edited Rattlers but those who feedbacked thought it was funny.

It doesn't matter right now because I'm kind of high on sugar and utterly useless. Sugar is the best thing ever.

blankversesfic March 21 2007, 23:59:11 UTC

That was awesome. Loved it. With that little smile of his, I can totally see this perfectly in my head.

regala_electra March 22 2007, 02:07:15 UTC

Thanks for the feedback. I'm pleased that you can see it as this was my attempt at creating a very visual story even though the images are distorted just slightly. :-)

redbrickrose March 22 2007, 03:56:06 UTC

I love the language used in this. Very vivid.

regala_electra March 23 2007, 04:22:21 UTC

Thanks. It's such a weirdly abstract piece, purposely being deceptable as to what's really happening and it's all images. I'm pleased you loved the language.

pheebs1 March 22 2007, 08:16:09 UTC

Oh wow what a great image, carried through fantastically.

The great beast pats its sated stomach, more a cast iron fortress than anything Amazing, fabulous the whole piece and all for ME!!!! You are too kind!!!!! Thank you so so much. Many hugs!

regala_electra March 23 2007, 04:23:31 UTC

I shall hug you back! I hope you're having a lovely time.

Thank you for the feedback, babe!

ignited March 22 2007, 13:40:47 UTC

I adored this. The language, the very idea of it turned from what could've been something normal or everyday into something... cool? I don't know how to describe it; it's that nifty. Eee, your writing continues to amaze me. :)

regala_electra March 23 2007, 04:25:09 UTC

Oh my Stef. Thank you for the feedback. It really was me playing with how far I could take the metaphor. My brain is being all weird and thinky. I remembered how much I love to experiment and this is a total experiment.