Fic: Stereoscopes (SPN, double-shot drabble, Gen, PG-13)

[regala_electra]

Stereoscopes (Gen)
Rating: PG-13 (disturbing imagery)
Pairing: slight Sam/Jess
Spoilers: S2 In My Time of Dying
Word Count: Each drabble is a little over 130 words.
Summary: He knits his father up and lets the needle slip. 2 drabbles featuring five double images.
Author’s Notes: Inspired by Monica Youn’s poem Stereoscopes, which can be found in her

Comments

[kita0610]

This is beautiful.

I love the flow, and the almost rhyme of it. It's like really dark poetry. So lovely.

Thanks for sharing this.

(Second fic, part 4- 'way' should be away?)

[regala_electra]

Thank you for the feedback, Kita. And goodness, I can't believe I missed the "way/away." It's "away." D'oh.

The poetry feel is very intentional. I couldn't get the formatting style I wanted so I changed it a bit and it does have a purposeful tense sound of a rhyme to it.

[regala_electra]

Thank you so much. Oh these boys just kill me in the vey good way.

[netweight]

Dude. WORDS FAIL, OKAY?!!! The symmetry, oh jesus fuck, Reg. With Sam as destroyer and Dean as caretaker in #4 and the jeans and the Salvation Army shirt and .... OH REG!!!

I don't even know what to say. Just... I love this. Love it. You continue to be the best, woman.

[regala_electra]

Hi, Sofia!

I love you.

Dean takes care (but like, please don't let people know, because he's wearing his Badass Boots today) and Sam's gotta be the one to end it.

This show portrays like a thousand of my characterization kinks in JUST two characters.

*smooches you*

[redbrickrose]

That's just gorgeous. You convey so much with so few words. It reads like poetry.

[regala_electra]

Thank you so much. I've always been fascinated by this way of contrasting two separate "images" or moments that have to be read together to find the story in the middle.

[a2zmom]

This is beautiful, more poetry than fic. Just painful.

1.

He won’t look at you the way he used to. It’s shame perfected.

Sam started asking why you never questioned this life. You won’t answer.

oh, yes.

[regala_electra]

Thank you so much. And yep, it's very much poetry just turned into a prose format. Ah Dean. The things that make him tick also make him ever so fucked up.