Aishiteiru, Goshujinsama - Ch. 16/?

Apr 18, 2013 07:59

Hey everyone. I had a few minutes so I've decided to post. NEW JOB!! ulgh, it can be tiring. Doing things a little backwards--i'll respond to comments later. For now i just wanted to get out the next chapter.

Oh, anyone who can guess my favorite line in this ch. gets special mentioning in the next!! ;Db

Here ya go! Enjoy~
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carey_chan April 18 2013, 12:48:42 UTC
omg yokatta! he´s alive wow..I held my breath while reading the first sentences,really
and the file..will be find out more about ohchans past? His own forgotten past...
ahh I am so so so looking foreward to the next chapter!!

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regaime June 11 2013, 13:29:39 UTC
KITA!! I just posted it. thanks for reading :)

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matsuaurore April 18 2013, 12:57:03 UTC
yayyyyy I'm so happy you post the chapter this morning, I haven't read it yet but I want to be one of the first readers who will send a comment, so I'll read it and I'll send you another comment XDDDD *I'm a baka, I know XD

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regaime June 11 2013, 13:29:53 UTC
lol.

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mariela_0078 April 18 2013, 14:43:01 UTC
YAY!!!! He's alive! YES! thank you so much for posting it today, you made my day ^ ^ I can not wait to know what's in Ohno's folder.

Ok I don't know if I can guess your favorite line in this ch. but this one was mine:

“I love you,” he whispered, resting his forehead against that of the man before him. The words came so easily with morphine oiling his tongue and death still seeming so close. He sighed, and the relief he felt was so immense it seemed to wash away most of the pain. “I’m so glad you’re safe…”
Awww it was so sweet ^^
Again thank you so much for share it ^^ looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

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regaime June 11 2013, 13:31:35 UTC
Oh Morphine...things always sound better when you're on drugs. Lol, a very good line indeed. Not my favorite though ;)

Thank you so much for reading!!

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mizakiwa April 18 2013, 19:24:25 UTC
I'd be devastated if you killed off Nino lol. Thanks for updating ♥ I seriously cannot wait to unravel Ohno's past :D I have a small hunch about Ohno's background story =w= I remember what Nino mentioned way back in the chapters hehe~

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regaime June 11 2013, 13:33:24 UTC
This story would END if i killed Nino. Where would it go? It's in his pov! I shudder to think. "Nino's revelations from the afterlife." It's a writer's nightmare... >____<

Oh right!! I remember that too... Hmmm.... >___>

Thanks so much for reading!!

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farah_hamiza April 18 2013, 19:51:23 UTC
You don't know how happy I am when you finally update this fanfic. It is the fiction that I love the most right now. Can't wait for the next chapter when they discover oh-chan's past. Hmm, I guess Ohchan is the boy that Nino has a crush on when he was in primary school. Ahh, I can't wait for the next one.
Your favorite line? I guess:
He brushed his knuckles against the soft skin of Ohno’s cheek, then pulled the man down to meet his lips.
Seriously, I don't even know why I chose that line. Maybe because it is my favorite line~

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regaime June 11 2013, 13:34:56 UTC
Ahh now I feel like a shit for making you wait so long!! m(_ _)m Gomen, ne?

MMM, i always love writing the fluffy bits, but it's not my #1. ;D

Thanks so much for reading!!

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