Signature - 2/?

[reeses6826]

Title: Signature
Chapter: 2/?
Author:reeses6826
Genres: (overall) Suspence, Angst, Smut, etc.
Pairings: (overall) Reita/Uruha, Reita/Aoi, Aoi/??
Rating: (overall) NC-17
Warnings: (overall) Rape, Some violence
Summary: The most infamous and elusive serial rapist the city has ever seen has left his mark on the wrong victim.  Suzuki Akira, driven by burning hatred

Comments

[xenocia]

Lol, I know, right? I was still waking up. I was going to wait til I had time to read it and respond coherently, but I gave in. Now my teeth are brushed, and I have cereal and a banana! Score!

And ooooooooooooomggggggggggggg it was so good! I was literally squealing with delight (there's something really wrong with me if a fic like this makes me squeal) and going "eep" and "ooh" as I read =w=;;

I might have scrolled down and saw a little of the A/N before I started reading, so while I was going through it, I totally thought you were going to make Yuu and Akira brothers, but then it wasn't them and it was Yuu and Kou, and I still got to be suprised, so yay!

This chapter was so intense though, and I really feel like your writing has improved so much in such a short span of time ^^ Dan always tells me the same about my writing, but it's really cool to see it happening to other people. I feel like I've been there since at least close to its inception! I'm a proud momma :3

And and -

As painfully familiar hands latched onto his back[...]
I noticed this when I started reading, and I just thought it was familiar cause he'd touched him earlier, BUT IT'S NOT. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

But no witnesses. No fingerprints. No DNA. Absolutely nothing to lead Akira to his target.
ALL SIGNS OF ATTACHMENTS TO LAW ENFORCEMENT DDD: THINK AKI THINK.

Ah! And the letter! We all knew what was going to be on it, but you drew it out so nicely. It still managed to be heartstopping and surprising o.o; Oh~ what Akira must have been feeling when he heard that ;~; I hope he didn't crash the car...

And still, throughout the story you kept me surprised!
But Kouyou knew. He knew exactly what was going to happen to him. He knew how much it would hurt and how much he would scream.
I thought it was because Kou had heard all the news reports and stories from Akira.

AND THEN THIS.

This wasn’t the first time. He knew just how Yuu liked it.
AND I WAS LIKE DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

That Akira’s best friend in the entire world hadn’t been brutalizing and raping him for years.
I wonder if Akira knows that they're brothers? And I wonder if Kouyou knows Yuu is the serial killer? I'm really interested in seeing how the dynamics play out, and I'm so looking forward to how everything unfolds.

Ah, and the scene between Kou and Yuu. I'd feel weird gushing about it because of the nature of it, but it was really very good. I hope Yuu was using some lube for himself at least |3 Dry sex is fun for no one! And damn, getting whipped in the chest has to be balls. I want to learn more about how this relationship developed this way. I wonder if Kou has any kind of feeling for Yuu at all o.o If it's not shame that's holding him back, but something else maybe? Hmm..

Oh! And I wonder what he's told Aki about his body. Does Kou have hang ups about sex? I wouldn't be surprised if he did, given his past. It doesn't seem like Yuu is really careful bout leaving marks D: All that beautiful skin ;~;

ANYWAY. MOAR WRITING. GO ON.

[reeses6826]

Oh I'm so glad you liked it!!! And I'm glad you still got to be surprised by the twist - I truly live to surprise readers :)

You think my writing is really improving??? *squees and dances around* Thank you mama!!!

Omg and I'm so excited because all the questions you're asking are the things I was already planning on exploring in the next couple chapters!!! I can't wait - I actually have the whole fic pretty much outlined at this point, but I change my mind a lot so I'll be curious to see how it comes out too.

Thanks as always for the very encouraging comments bb <3