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randomicicle September 29 2011, 17:44:32 UTC
Maru is the leader. He is the leader. I love the concept of Kame being a mimic and how that alone makes him a good right hand. Idk whether it's flattering or not, but it feels coherent. Like this comment, that is not. There's something about Kame being the one to reject Jin that always gets me all asjdhakd. Nakamarad ♥

Another thing is that I love AUs that are so close to RL in the alternate settings. And this was wonderful in doing that.

Sasha. fierce. :||||

OMG. EVERYTHING ABOUT THE ROOM SCENES IS WONDERFUL. OMG.

So.. Ran is also a talent?! OMG.

"I asked him about it once. He said he thinks it's weirder to be moving as a woman when he's not one." >> Junno is such a straight guy. I love him.

Also, does it make me a pervert how much I love this triangle of Kame and Ran and Jelly, despite the girls having his RL dog names :|. It sounds like a wonderful match, Kame and two girls ♥

This whole story was wonderful. Wonderful and gorgeous ♥ I said before, the premise is so interesting and I was hooked. It took me a while to finish it, not because I didn't want to, but because I wanted to find some peaceful time and savour it. And it was the most delicious piece of writing I've read in a while ♥. You, not-so-anon writer, are amazing ♥

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threewalls October 13 2011, 23:23:34 UTC
Of course Maru's the leader. Beatboxing, you know? He runs in this world.

I do love the first advance being Jin's, and Kame not being ready, and it taking them longer because of that. I really do. <3

Sasha's a talent, Ran's a talent. (Kame goes for talents, though I think he probably wouldn't want to be pushed the way Sasha likes from her guys.)

Junno finds it weird being so short if he tries syncing with women. It's also weird being Ryo for that same reason, though Ryo didn't like hearing this.

How Kame, Ran and Jelly work could be its own story. And, yeah, Kame choosing names for people, not so imaginative, is he? Not that he *has* dogs named Ran and Jelly in this universe, which would be even more creepy.

Thanks so much for this comment. ♥

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