Haiku and senryu

May 09, 2010 23:23

One of these days I will get back to writing something other than haiku. Just not today.

Pain is good ~ pain is focus ~ pain is life

Prompt: search

Life, love, hope, dreams ~ the search is all we have; ~ along life's path.

His search for meaning ~ brought him to truth; ~ he found her.

Even at ~ the moment of finding ~ the search goes on

Prompt: bottle

The note slips in; ~ a bottle ~ filled with floating regret

Knock 'em down ~ But you remain; the last ~ bottle on my wall

Prompt: paint

Paint me a future ~ Every day fresh and clean; ~ With you.

Prompt: incognito, spirit, astound

Incognito heart ~ know no fear, my secret love; ~ spirit, hope astound.

Prompt: savour

A trickle of juice ~ from trembling lip to throat; ~ darting tongue savours.

This moment won't last ~ ephemeral, precious; ~ savour, cherish, feel.

These three were prompted by a challenge to use a cliché (from a list provided). I chose "beats me", "twist of fate" and "curiosity killed the cat".

Rain beats me, senseless, ~ battering soft and urgent; ~ creeping through my shell.

Fumbling fingers ~ unravel our twist of fate; ~ destiny unknown.

Curiosity ~ killed the cat; Shroedinger ~ wasn't so sure.

senryu, haiku

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