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This was inspired by listening to Bad Religion's rhyming of "debris" with "ill at ease," which was a purposeful change to the word, and I felt it made the song flow. Another one I like is Sondre Lerche's "idear/near" couplet. Finally, I like how Marathon changes the rhythm of the word to make it stand out and fit in the rhythm of the song. How do you feel?

Poll De-breeze