FIC: I Promised You A Heart You Promised To Keep

[redtapestry]

title i promised you a heart you promised to keep
fandom supernatural RPS/J2
rating nc-17
pairing jared/jensen, JDM/MLP, one sided daneel/jensen
summary jensen's in his blood, whether he likes it or not. you can't ignore biology.
warnings language, man on man lovin' (slash), violence
disclaimer this isn't true. at all. title from "prelude 12/21" by

Comments

[siiy]

oh my god this was such an awesome sequel to it, I loved how Jeff and Mary took Jared back without thought *_* I'm lol kind of happy that there wasn't too much focus on Danneel e_e I mean, besides their own trouble they probably couldn't handle a problem from outside of their own and probably break the fragile truce they had D: I also LOVED the moment in which they were wolf and Jensen was giving Jared more attention than the other wolves *___* And yeah I understand why Jared wanted to go back after being 3 weeks without Jensen and before that 5 months with him [omg so long before they went back and they still hadn't talked everything out @_@ until the last moment wtf] AND I'LL BE HONEST, FOR A SEC THERE, when Jared said sorry and Jensen said sorry I THOUGHT JENSEN WOULD DRIVE HIM BACK TO THE AIRPORT AND THEY'D GO DIFFERENT WAYS AGAIN AND IF THAT HAPPENED I COULDN'T HANDLE IT X_X

So I skipped till the ending to read what was going on cause I wanted them to be together again in the end, but then I didn't get it cause why were they driving and why was Misha mentioned :'D SO I had to start from where I left again all the while DREADING to read Jared leaving again ;O; OMG IM SO RELIEVED HE DIDNT - actually it bothered me so much that after I finished reading it and went to clean my room that that uncomfortable feeling was still in my chest, even though I knew they were together the moment of them driving to the manor and then going to the airport haunted me X_X BUT fuck the ending was awesome, especially Jensen sleeping in the car and being a dork despite being always so gruff and I loved it and and I hope they'll stay together *______*

So I usually don't rant this much over fanfic in comments cause people might find it weird BUT I CANT HELP IT NOW because it's so awesome and I love it even though the wtf feeling was what stayed with me the most but the ending <3333 Thank you so much for writing and and I adore it and I can't express enough how much I love this :'D I need to tell the world of this beauty !

[redtapestry]

This is quite the rant AND I LOVE IT!

I'm so happy you love the sequel! It was quite the fic to live up to, and it was such an intense process. I know I rewrote the beginning a billion times, and then got stuck a couple of times throughout. But it turned out pretty awesome, and I'm completely satisfied with it.

AND I'LL BE HONEST, FOR A SEC THERE, when Jared said sorry and Jensen said sorry I THOUGHT JENSEN WOULD DRIVE HIM BACK TO THE AIRPORT AND THEY'D GO DIFFERENT WAYS AGAIN AND IF THAT HAPPENED I COULDN'T HANDLE IT X_X

I wouldn't do that to you!! Besides, that would have meant another five pages of them getting back together, and I couldn't handle that! I do think that the "sorry"s were important; they were saying so much to each other in the forest and back at Langford, but nobody ever said sorry! That was important, and I apologize for the resulting anxiety attack. :)

So I skipped till the ending to read what was going on cause I wanted them to be together again in the end, but then I didn't get it cause why were they driving and why was Misha mentioned :'D SO I had to start from where I left again all the while DREADING to read Jared leaving again ;O

That's what you get for skipping to the end...;)

I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm happy that it met all the requirements. I think it's a good ending to the story.

kind of happy that there wasn't too much focus on Danneel e_e I mean, besides their own trouble they probably couldn't handle a problem from outside of their own and probably break the fragile truce they had D:

And yeah, the whole Jensen/Daneel thing didn't need to be included; it was hinted at with her dirty looks. The story in my head was: with Jared out of the picture, Daneel thought she could move into his vacant spot and become the Alpha's mate. But he left to get Jared at Langford, and she missed her very nonexistent window of opportunity. So that's what that was about.

[siiy]

Haha glad you do then :'D

I didn't imagine it to be such q HUGE sequel !!! [mind you I LOVE it !!!!! :'D] and I'm glad it satisfied you as well cause that's also important ! /o/

LOL thank God you didn't do that to me :'D seriously the weird feeling followed me around for a while and, y'know, when I read angsty fics the uncomfortable feeling follows me for a while so I don't read those a lot and yeah it just had that much impact on me :DDDD And yeah I'm glad they said sorry as well and and and Jared packing his stuff [OMG I WAS LIKE WAIT WAT] but then the next sentence was bringing it to Jensen's room... phew [btw the details of before that Jared lied on the right side/had his own space in the closet = me squealing like a fangirl] I can just imagine a together forever and rainbows and unicorns but lol knowing you you'd probably throw in some drama again XD

The ending was perfect though !! I'll just sit here and think of them being bff and having no more problems anymore haha :'D

Oh I liked the Danneel moments but if she had a bigger role I think she'd probably ruin it what they already had D: So I'm glad that didn't happen !! Plus I always like it a little when there's a little jealousy of another character in *____*