Comments | redrikki: FIC: Déjà Vu, Homicide/Supernatual

redrikki

FIC: Déjà Vu, Homicide/Supernatual

Jan 19, 2008 20:57

Title: Déjà Vu
Fandom: Supernatural/Homicide: Life on the Streets
Rating: PG
Characters: John,Dean and Sam Winchester, Bayliss, Lewis, Gee, Howard,Crosetti
Spoilers: Up through season 1 of Homicide
Disclaimer: Both shows are owned by their respective creaters, who, by the way, rock. I, sadly, own nothing.
Note: Thanks to Sophie84 and Miss_yt for ( Read more... )

fandom: supernatural, fandom: homicide, crossover: homicide/supernatural, genre: crossover

Comments 70

ladyjanelly January 20 2008, 02:46:34 UTC

That was awesome. I don't know the homicide guys too well, but it still worked.

I love Dean's hesitance, and Sam's confidence. "So?"

Loved it.

redrikki January 20 2008, 03:19:40 UTC

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked it. I heartily recommend becoming better acquainted withe the Homicide guys.

montisello January 20 2008, 03:02:42 UTC

Oh, Homicide, I have missed you.

You nailed Bayliss perfectly, and your ending was double edged with Bayliss' pessimism despite the happy ending he doesn't even know he has. Nice ghost, too. And Winchester in the fishbowl with Lewis -- that was genius.

Nice job!

redrikki January 20 2008, 03:21:30 UTC

I'm glad you liked the ending. That's pretty much what I was trying for, but I didn't want to whack anyone over the head with it. It's nice to hear it worked.

dannyblue January 20 2008, 03:04:45 UTC

Oh, my, that was good. Just excellent.

I love the outsiders point of view of the Winchesters. They really are a fascinating family, those three. And I loved how you wrote them, Dean especially. Even in his young teens, he's becoming the dangerous guy we all love. But he's still enough of a kid to play with a toy car. I loved it.

Actually, I loved the entire story.

Wonderful job.

redrikki January 20 2008, 03:23:03 UTC

Thanks. I was going for that mix of childish and dangerous ghost hunter for Dean and I'm glad it worked. Of course, he's still the kind of guy to play with a toy car, but, well, you get that idea.

tabaqui January 20 2008, 03:24:23 UTC

Ooooh, very cool. That's one 'crime show' i haven't seen much of, but i love seeing the Winchesters from the outsider POV. Very cool.
:)

redrikki January 20 2008, 03:26:25 UTC

Sadly, Homicide was pre-internet fanfiction. Glad you liked the story.

inlovewithnight January 20 2008, 03:39:17 UTC

Oh, *nice*. You really have all the Homicide stuff down cold, and this is a great pre-series bit for the Winchesters.

redrikki January 20 2008, 03:41:50 UTC

Thanks for saying. I was sort of on a Homicide dvd binge when I started this. I'm glad it paid off.