Anonymeme: Constructive Criticism
The reason I'm doing this here instead of on RPGchan is because RPGchan is still too new, and it'd either be 1) pretty obvious it was me asking for concrit anyway or 2) interpreted as antagonism from certain people.
How's my writing? What are things you think I need to improve? Do my characters have similar voices, interests, philosophies? What words do I use too often? Do you wish I would be more verbose or less? Do I do too much metacommentary? Am I clear and understandable? Do I need to work on physical description, action sequences, pacing? Am I boring? Which character do you like or dislike the most, and why? What characters are you indifferent to? Etc.
If you only have nice things to say, don't bother to comment. Anonymous commenting is on. (I think it's always been on, but whatever.)
How's my writing? What are things you think I need to improve? Do my characters have similar voices, interests, philosophies? What words do I use too often? Do you wish I would be more verbose or less? Do I do too much metacommentary? Am I clear and understandable? Do I need to work on physical description, action sequences, pacing? Am I boring? Which character do you like or dislike the most, and why? What characters are you indifferent to? Etc.
If you only have nice things to say, don't bother to comment. Anonymous commenting is on. (I think it's always been on, but whatever.)