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At The End Of All Your Lines - Doctor Who {Donna/Rose - PG}

Jul 19, 2009 16:58

Title: At the End of All Your Lines
Prompt: 012 - Tears
Fandom/Character: Doctor Who - Donna Noble/Rose Tyler
Rating: PG
Summary: “If you come with me,” Rose promised, “he’ll have everything to live for." Set during Turn Left. For 100_women [ Table Here]

( This woman had to die, and Rose had to talk her into it. )

fanfic: doctor who, character: donna noble, fanfic: 100_women, character: rose tyler, pairing: donna/rose, rating: pg, fanfic

Comments 19

exx_cecilegr July 20 2009, 03:22:48 UTC

Ouch, this is lovely. Great job capturing both characters. Thank you for writing and sharing!

slartibartfast July 20 2009, 16:19:47 UTC

Definitely ouch. Thank you for reading this, I'm glad you enjoyed :)

kattahj July 20 2009, 07:58:07 UTC

Very touching. It particularly hurt (in a good way) that Donna's dreams are so much less than she could have, yet so much more than she has.

slartibartfast July 20 2009, 16:20:19 UTC

Yeah, Donna just doesn't know what she can be. It's one of the saddest things about both Turn Left and her ending in the series. :(

Thank you!

talkingtothesky July 20 2009, 09:24:42 UTC

Just beautiful. ♥

slartibartfast July 20 2009, 16:20:39 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥

madhowan July 20 2009, 15:14:55 UTC

Oh, Donna. I wish she knew that she is better than just ordinary. And, oh, Rose.

Very lovely. ♥

slartibartfast July 20 2009, 16:21:05 UTC

♥ Thank you so much. Donna is so wonderful, I love writing her.

roxyk630 July 20 2009, 16:34:57 UTC

I've not seen much Turn Left fic, but this is lovely. Absolutely lovely.

slartibartfast July 20 2009, 16:47:13 UTC

Thank you. It's a great episode.