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Fic: Insides - C/L, R/L (implied)

Apr 25, 2006 00:34

Title: Insides
Pairing: Cat/Lister, Rimmer/Lister (implied)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own Red Dwarf, despite my feverent wishes to the contrary. Ditto for making money off this.
Spoilers: Terrorform
Notes: A response, of sorts, to roadstergal's "Lies". Written as part of the fanfic100 challenge - my table is here.

( “You smell wrong,” came the reply from the two glowing eyes at the back of his bunk. )

ep : terrorform, author: kahvi, challenge: fanfic100

Comments 11

roadstergal April 24 2006, 22:59:40 UTC

Frustrating, but lovely. ;)

He giggled to himself, and pretended to sneak his way into the sleeping quarters.

I just love how you write Lister.

His fingernails, which were tougher and harder than those of a human, scratched lightly across the surface of Lister's skin, and Lister shuddered. Hungrily, he leaned into the Cat’s offered kiss, thrilling as the feline’s coarse tongue scraped the insides of his mouth deliciously raw.

Great Cat-detail.

You’re the one sneaking into my bunk at all hours when… When I’m alone!” And now he had been alone for...

Very evocative. Very expressive of the tension between the fights between Rimmer and Lister and the connection to Lister's libido.

It was just a form of stress release, Lister had always reasoned. That way, he didn’t have to think of it as having sex with his cat.

Mmm. Denial.

The words fell like tomb-stones on exposed feet.

*snicker*

There was the distinct impression of an invisible tail, waving in the stale, re-cycled air.Lovely imagery. And great imagery on Cat's exit, too ( ... )

kahvi April 24 2006, 23:05:29 UTC

Thank you; you know how I feel about your Rimmer. You know, that I want to strangle him. And that I love him. *happy sigh* Hehehe...

I tried to make the ending as good as possible; it was going to be worse. But then your Arn made me feel bad. Poor thing... *looks over WIPs to see which one is more positive* Yeah... I have an idea of what to try to finish next... ;)

roadstergal April 24 2006, 23:26:31 UTC

Oh, he's a manipulative bugger. Don't let him guilt you too much. ;)

busangane April 25 2006, 00:22:13 UTC

*purrs* Angsty triangle & dramah! Cats can be sooo jealous sometimes!

kahvi April 25 2006, 00:42:41 UTC

Speaking of triangles... There's something in the works. ;)
Glad you liked it - thanks for feeding back!

pikapal101 April 25 2006, 00:29:12 UTC

Oooh, I like it! Though i'm not much of a Cat/Lister fan, I still think this was great!
I love how the Cat was angry that Lister said that he liked Rimmer, and how he *didn't* end up saying it. Heh, fit in really wel with the plot.
Another well done.
Here's a cookie. *hands you a cookie of your choice*

kahvi April 25 2006, 00:47:42 UTC

Oooh - cookie! Yay! :D
I'm no Cat/Lister fan myself, but sometimes ya just gotta write 'em. Glad you liked it!

ellieet April 25 2006, 16:57:59 UTC

Gawelga! There you go again!

I mean that in a good way of course. I've already proposed to one potential C/L shipper, maybe I should ask for your hand in marriage too...

kahvi April 25 2006, 19:17:06 UTC

Hehehe - glad you liked it. I've got a Rimmer/Lister/Cat up my sleeve too, and there's a cute little PG Cat/Lister on the way.

Sadly, I am taken, but I'm flattered nonetheless! ;)

ellieet April 26 2006, 16:11:18 UTC

Cute Cat/Lister! Horray! That marriage offer still stands - or shall I just dance a jig?