Hi There, I'm New.

[lordvalerymimes]

So yes I'm relatively new to the fandom and entirely new to the world of FanFiction, but I've been utterly smitten with Red Dwarf and all the Lister and Rimmer slash that is out there. I've been reading a ton of it over the last few months and I finally decided to bite the bullet and write something myself. I know I've got a lot to live up to since

Comments

[sallycandance]

Welcome! Nice piece of fanfic you've written there - very sexy!

[lordvalerymimes]

Thanks very much!

[missflibble]

I guess we'll skip the traditional sacrificial offerings in favour of your awesome introductory fic!

BTW I love your icon! Took me a few minutes to clock it properly ^__^

[rosecathy1]

*whispers* What does the icon mean?

[missflibble]

It's probably me being slow - but at first I didn't realise it was Lister as a mime artist, clutching a heart with Rimmer's initials.

[rosecathy1]

OH. Ohhhh.
If you're slow, I must be very slow, because I've been looking at it for weeks on AO3 -_-

[rosecathy1]

The slash monster claims another victim :D

The images from Lister's fantasy are very sexy and dirty and...oof.

Unsolicited crit regarding voices, feel free to ignore: Some of the thought-quotes read more like things that Lister would say out loud, and that does jar a little bit. But then again, if this were played out on screen, we could be hearing his thoughts in a voiceover, so maybe you're on to something??

[lordvalerymimes]

I thought of having the thoughts be italicized rather than being formatted in the standard quotes for dialogue, but I wasn't sure whether it would make the formatting of the whole thing awkward. I've never written something with so many thoughts before so I wasn't quite sure how to handle it.

I did always imagine that Lister would sound in his head pretty much just how he sounds when he talks, but that's my take on him. :)

[janamelie]

Hello! No apology required for joining this comm, especially when you came bearing fic. ;)

If you hadn't said you were new to writing fanfic, I wouldn't have known - this is sweet and sexy. Since you asked, I did spot a typo: "taught member" should be "taut".

I was in the same position as you a few years ago. I nervously posted my first ever fic here, people were nice about it and I carried on writing and gaining confidence, which is the only way to improve. :)

[lordvalerymimes]

Thank you so much! And thank you for catching that! I hate typos! :)

[kronette]

Hiya and welcome to the funny farm. Please, by all means, continue to write :)

(I wrote 11 pages yesterday. 11 PAGES. YAH!)

[janamelie]

Of your heartrending break-up fic or the Lister-as-male-consort one? Or are they one and the same? :)

[kronette]

Consort Lister. I just posted about it. Its been brewing in my brain for over a YEAR. I thought of it while I was writing Static, which I posted in May last year. Sheesh. That's a long time for a story to take shape. Here's the vague idea of what he's wearing, only nothing is buttoned on him.

My break-up fic and rosecathy1's have similar ideas and phrases, actually. It was a bit scary to read how close I am, but yet her's has a better coherency to start. I have to let that one simmer some more. It's clearly not quite ready :)

[janamelie]

Well, that looks lovely and I'm sure your descriptions will do him justice. Looking forward to reading this. :)