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kahvi in reddwarfslash

Fic: Sixth Sense - R/L - PG-13

Feb 15, 2006 01:22

This one sort of freaks me out. In a good way? Possibly. I don't know how I came to write this, it just happened. I swear, these things have a life of their own!

Title: Sixth Sense
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own Red Dwarf. Don't make money from this.
Notes: Written as part of the fanfic100 challenge - my table is here.

( I have a sixth sense about these things, I can tell. I could always tell, even back in cadet-school. )

author: kahvi, rating: pg-13, ep: bodyswap, pairing: lister/rimmer, challenge: fanfic100

Comments 12

roadstergal February 15 2006, 00:33:55 UTC

It's disturbing, but I really liked it - you captured their discomfort perfectly.

I can't imagine being in someone else's body (provided it's a decent one) and not, er, trying it out, out of blinding curiosity, if nothing else, but maybe I'm just a perv. Or Pandora.

kahvi February 15 2006, 21:05:52 UTC

I know. I think it's disturbing partly because I can identify with what they are feeling, and that freaks me out a little.

Glad you liked it. :)

lady_draco February 15 2006, 00:57:57 UTC

Hee. You've done well =) You can really feel their discomfort at such a touchy topic, pardon the pun. I can't wait till your next fic *Grins*

kahvi February 15 2006, 21:06:12 UTC

Hurrah!

beetle_breath February 15 2006, 02:42:06 UTC

The body swap always made me think. Especially the shower tong scene. XD

kahvi February 15 2006, 21:06:56 UTC

Oh yeah... I've always wondered what the hell happened exactly...

beetle_breath February 15 2006, 21:09:22 UTC

On the audio commentary, Craig makes a crack about Rimmer being shocked at the large size. XD

kirke_novak February 15 2006, 12:50:02 UTC

Mwahaha! Only Rimmer could have a 6th sense about something like that. If he was a superhero, his power would probably 'pissing people off by being in the same room with them' or 'picking his nose without being spotted' :P

Great job (but when it wasn't?)!! :D:D:D

roadstergal February 15 2006, 18:47:44 UTC

If he was a superhero, his power would probably 'pissing people off by being in the same room with them' or 'picking his nose without being spotted'

Oh, that's hilarious! :D

It does remind me of a round of Odd Man Out on Says You!, when they went over the failed superhero concepts - Exist-man! Habit-man!

kahvi February 15 2006, 21:09:01 UTC

Then truly, he IS a superhero!

Thanks for feeding me back niceness. :)

dracosmef February 16 2006, 18:14:30 UTC

LOL I really enjoyed this one! We all know what Rimmer was doing in the other bunk, now don't we, boys and girls?

kahvi February 16 2006, 19:13:45 UTC

What? No! You couldn't possibly tell, he wasn't being obvious, so how could you tell? ;)