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Fic: Rain - Rimmer/Lister - PG-13

Feb 10, 2006 02:22

Title: Rain
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I still don't own Red Dwarf, nor is there any money in this for me. Life is cruel!
Notes: Written as part of the fanfic100 challenge - my table is here.

( In the training films on cabin-fever they’d had to sit through three million years ago they had never mentioned 'what to do in case you find yourself half-naked in a shower with a shipmate you thought you despised.' )

ep: legion, author: kahvi, rating: pg-13, pairing: lister/rimmer, challenge: fanfic100

Comments 31

roadstergal February 10 2006, 01:51:11 UTC

Aww, smeeegggg... Lister just had to flag down the black taxi for Real Street, didn't he? :(

Beautifully done!

kahvi February 10 2006, 11:16:04 UTC

Thank you. :)
And that's a lovely analogy - would you mind if I used it in the *touches wood* sequel for this? I'm hoping to get one together one of these days.

roadstergal February 10 2006, 17:09:06 UTC

I lifted it shamelessly from Legion, so you'll have to ask Grant and Naylor. ;)

kahvi February 10 2006, 20:01:26 UTC

So that's why it sounded familiar! I HAVE seen Red Dwarf before, honesly! *blushes*

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beetle_breath February 10 2006, 02:14:40 UTC

Aw! I wanted hotsteamyshowersex a happy ending!

Still, really good. I tried writing a similiar fic but it sort of fizzled out.

kahvi February 10 2006, 11:14:12 UTC

Hopefully, one day there will be hotsteamyshowersex, but this fic didn't want it that way, sadly. It too fizzled out before I edited it heavily. I tried writing a sequel, but that fizzled out too, so I wrecked it. I'll get there someday!

Thanks! :)

rondaks February 10 2006, 02:29:05 UTC

That was one of your better. I really liked it.

kahvi February 10 2006, 11:16:47 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you did. Thanks for feeding back!

dracosmef February 10 2006, 03:38:18 UTC

Darn it all, Lister, you couldn't have let it last a little longer?!?!? Seriously, I really liked it! I liked the description of the kiss, and how Rimmer tasted and the wetness of his mouth. Very well written

kahvi February 10 2006, 11:17:40 UTC

The description of the kiss is my favorite part of this, probably. I'm glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the nice feedback. :)

lyrstzha February 10 2006, 05:14:40 UTC

Mmm, another lovely fic! The tactile details are wonderful. Also, I especially liked the impact of the last line.

kahvi February 10 2006, 11:18:46 UTC

Thank you. :)
I do like to try to be Roald Dahl; I want my endings to work well. I'm glad this one did for you. :)