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Fic: Broken - R/L - PG

Mar 04, 2007 13:59

Title: Broken
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own Red Dwarf, Grant/Naylor does. I make no money from this.
Spoilers: Marooned, and if you want to get technical, Thanks for the Memory.
Notes: I started writing this for the International Interfandom Day Of Making Out challenge, but... erm... I was too slow. So I re-worked it ( Read more... )

author: kahvi

Comments 8

felineranger March 4 2007, 14:01:46 UTC

Mmmmmm...Lister yummyness. Makes me want to purr...

kahvi March 4 2007, 14:57:29 UTC

Tasty, isn't he? Thanks for feeding back. :)

eastpath March 5 2007, 04:09:42 UTC

Ooooh delish. I should take more time to read the stuff you post... :) (busy as hell lately...)

kahvi March 5 2007, 20:24:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad they are enjoyed. :)

rathboned March 6 2007, 02:05:04 UTC

I did like that! Can't believe its taken me this long to find the lj for Red Dwarf slash. You caught Listers voice really well

kahvi March 6 2007, 09:48:59 UTC

Thank you! It's great to know it comes through even when the point of view is not first person.

And welcome! :)
Check out our backlog - roadstergal's stories are among my favorites. She and I also collaborate from time to time.

roadstergal March 6 2007, 07:23:25 UTC

This is so sweet!

Raspberries; tart and fresh and sharp, like summer. She tasted like them too, and it had been warm, and sunny, and kissing her had been the easiest thing in the world, though he'd never done it before.
*sigh*

Vanessa Johnson nearly threw herself at him in the corridor outside the library. She was two years older than him and had braces that scratched at his lips and made his gums bleed. His mouth tasted like iron for the rest of the day - he brushed like a maniac when he finally got home. He'd been afraid to go to the library ever since, and had tried to keep away from books as a general rule.
*giggle* And CanonExplanation!

you could call it sex, if you were a charitable sort of person. Things got inserted into other things, and it was all terribly exciting, at least for Lister
Awww...

It's like Lister's version of 88 Lines About 44 Women!

Er, if I can, in my copious spare time?

kahvi March 6 2007, 10:03:19 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad I didn't decide to list them all. Then again, ASCEM had a series of drabbles a few years ago called "Kissing Captain Kirk" (parodied later by the hillarious "Spooging on Captain Kirk"), so it might have been doable.

You know, as I was writing this it struck me that it would work nicely as a song. Perhaps in my copious spare time, I'll convert it? Possibly?

And yes, please! :D