Fic: Back - R/L - NC-17 - part 5 of 6

[kahvi]

Title: Back - part 5 of 6
Authors: roadstergal and kahvi
Pairings: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17, for adult themes.
Disclaimer: We do not own them, and we make no money from this.
Note: Look ye here for part 1, part 2, part 3 and part 4.

"You wouldn't believe the positions I can be in when I negotiate..."

Comments

[notalwaysweak]

*squee*

[kahvi]

:D

*hums the Ace-theme*

[roadstergal]

:D Thanks!

[eviltigerlily]

Wow. You ladies do spin a good tale!

The bit about Langley was most disturbing. Seriously, I'm going to have nightmares. Though the Kochanski's voice fading in and out during... was just priceless.

Love how Rimmer gets to play hero. IT's good that he gets an opportunity to use his Ace skils. And the excange between the boys from:

I missed you, Dave. I couldn't sleep at night. I just... ached, wanting you

to the end there was just so beautiful and heartbreaking. Actually talking for once.
I'm curious to find out what the devil happened exactly. Just tell me it was Kryten's doing, go on, tell me.

[roadstergal]

Blame kahvi for the tale. And the fady bit. Isn't she awesome?

Oh, we'll tell you. ;)

[kahvi]

Yay! Thank you. :)

It was fun to be Langley. I squeed about it to my boyfriend as I was writing it. He didn't care. Well, he did a little. ;)

Rimmer!Ace love! I was so excited about that. Humming the Rimmer theme and all. :D Ain't nothing like roadstergal's Rimmer.

I'm glad you liked it - it was heaps of fun to do. As for who did it... Well. You'll see. ;)

[lady_draco]

Whee!!!!

:)

Much love heh. The whole Langley/Kochanski moment was a classic. *nods head* Not to mention Action!Rimmer. Oh yes!

:( I don't want it to end. Boo!

[roadstergal]

Ain't kahvi somethin'?

I don't want it to end

Oh, and we're going to stop writing now. No more fics. *snort*

[lady_draco]

*rolls eyes* You know what I meant.

[kahvi]

Yay! The Langley/Kochanski thing was much fun. Sometimes I was laughing so hard I couldn't type.

Ah, Rimmer love. He's so sweet in this. The lady writes him so well. Naked and jumping. Underpants. Love. :D

Aw, there will be more. No, really. *shows you WIP folder* Erm, sorry - it's a bit messy in there.

[noirenails]

Ahhaha. I have this little habit concerning this fic: every time you post a new chapter, I quickly scroll down if I see Lister and Rimmer's names there :D Because even though I've kind of started loving Billy too (not Sebastian, even though I do love the way you've written him), Rimmer is Rimmer and Lister is Lister they are the boys that I truly love :) And wahey, the names were there this time! It feels like there is a happy place in my stomach. Now to actual fic-reading with numerous quotations :P

"Today is your lucky day, Citizen!" a voice as smooth as snakeskin declared.
I hate that voice already. Oh boy.

"Oh, yes..." Langley studied Billy's features as if evaluating a work of art.
*is eerily disturbed by Langley's fangirlish qualities :D or fanboyish, whatever*also, eyebrows get lost in the hairline*

Well-practiced condescension oozed from his mouth like foam from a men's room soap-dispenser.
Ew :D

The Langley/Kohchanski voice overlap idea was brilliant.

"Are you all right, Arnold? You sound a little filthy dirty whore!"

[roadstergal]

Glad you like the Rimmer and Lister return! :)

Man, I always thought that the fellow with the gun in BtR had such potential...

Ain't kahvi something? She's responsible for the voice overlap and the men's room foam.

[kahvi]

*blushes* :D

Not mens room foam in general though, I hasten to add.

[kahvi]

Aw, no love for Sebastian! You know, I really like Sebastian. He's Lister, you know, just with all his drives repressed. That what makes a monster. That, and the drive to do good in a society where the idea of "good" has been warped. :/

Gah - fangirl Langley! *shudders* Glad you enjoyed him though. ;)

The Rimmer/Billy fighting is one of my favorite bits. "A drink and a good fuck!" Aww...

Thank you! :D Hope you enjoy the next bit too. :)