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Fic: Touch - R/L/L - R

Sep 13, 2006 16:09

Title: Touch
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister/Lister
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Red Dwarf owns me, not the other way around. No money is made from this.
Spoilers: Timeslides
Notes: This is what comes of staying up all night capping Timeslides. Written in a hurry at work, so concrit, while always welcome, is particularly welcome this time! Written as part of the fanfic100 ( Read more... )

author: kahvi

Comments 31

mythverdandi September 13 2006, 17:10:48 UTC

...That was disturbingly hot. *fans self* Very nice!

kahvi September 13 2006, 19:35:42 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for feeding back. :D
And yes, it is getting a little hot in here. *cough*

eviltigerlily September 13 2006, 17:17:29 UTC

Guh, two Listers!
I really like the last pargraph. Some beautiful writing.

kahvi September 13 2006, 19:37:04 UTC

Two Listers can only be better than one, no? Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

roadstergal September 13 2006, 20:33:28 UTC

Oh, dear me. In a good way!

Hearing the hopeful tones, and knowning the begging, puppy-dog eyes that would accompany them

Lovely imagery.

"Liar," a youthful voice chirped in his ear, sending thrills that no sane, heterosexual man should be feeling down Rimmer's holographic spine.

Great! And you do a lovely job with the distinction between youngchirpy!Lister and current!Lister. And how they both answered. And I had an image of Rimmer as the Wicked Witch - I'm meeeeelting!

feeling something dig into his back

Oh my. And lovely detail of head-pull-back.

"I knew you liked it," his penis said

Oh, dear. I am now having top-hat images, courtesy of Linds.

bathed in sweat that had not - could not - soak through his sheets, looking around, panting, his hand and groin sticky with unreal come.

Terrific writing.

He had lost it again. Gained and lost and nothing to show for it. Nothing, except an over-wound libido feeding off those few moments of solid-form existence, and pushing these nightmares on him.

Ah, perfect Rimmer.

kahvi September 13 2006, 21:10:23 UTC

The capping started my thoughts going in this direction, but I think your icons were the trigger. I blame this one in particular!

I'm glad the distinction worked; it helps that Craig and Emile are so different.

I gave Linds some mushroom images in return. I think it's only fair.

Thank you very much! :)

roadstergal September 13 2006, 21:12:13 UTC

I must learn the story of the mushrooms.

I was thinking, while looking at the caps, that Craig got the lips in the family.

kahvi September 13 2006, 21:30:20 UTC

Remind me some time. ;)

And yes. Lips. Yes. Heh, there's a "guess which tongue is Craig's" segment in Universe Challenge. I couldn't do it!

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thoraarwin September 13 2006, 20:47:37 UTC

My God, two Listers! One for the weekdays and one for Sunday best! Err...*g*

"Liar," a youthful voice chirped in his ear, sending thrills that no sane, heterosexual man should be feeling down Rimmer's holographic spine.

Love, love that line. Hmm- how about a happy fic now?;-) Oh okay!*ducks* I never said a word!

kahvi September 13 2006, 21:12:49 UTC

Ah... What one couldn't do with two Listers...
And yes, I know, I know. *hangs head in shame* But this just had to get written. And hey; R/L/L makes me happy! ;)

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for feeding back!

notalwaysweak September 14 2006, 04:48:48 UTC

...

Now there's a pairing that hasn't been done before, AFAIK...

kahvi September 14 2006, 07:02:52 UTC

Really? Well, I just figured, if Rimmer is repressing his attraction to Lister, two Listers might make his brain collapse and give up, letting it seep into, at the very least, the semi-concious state of his dreams.

But really, it was the caps talking. Screencapping - just say no!