Fic: On Hold - R/L (imp) - PG-13

[kahvi]

Title: On Hold
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister (implied)
Rating: PG-13, for mild violence and liberties taken with flora.
Disclaimer: I'm just a fangirl, I own nothing. And I make no money from this.
Spoilers: Everything up to Back In The Red (all three parts).
Notes: Written for lady_draco.

*embarrassed shuffle of feet* And, of course, much, MUCH thanks to roadstergal for

Comments

[roadstergal]

Righty!

Rimmer groaned, giving up trying to fish his favorite pen out of the - admittedly squeaky clean and unused - toilet bowl in the holding cell using only exaggerated eyebrow movements.

The sarcasm dribbled from Rimmer’s words like molasses from - well - whatever it was molasses dripped from. Rimmer had never been entirely certain. Was it made by insects; like honey? No, that wasn’t right.

Brava!

Treeporn? Whereinhell did you get that?

Great Rimmer reacting to Kochanski - all of the ways he reacted! - and great Lister reacting to Rimmer reacting to Kocahnski. Loved Rimmer catching onto holo-Rimmer, just for the irritation factor. Tangential - in the initial shoot of the conversation between Rimmer and Lister in BITR, Rimmer didn't have a disk from Holly's database - he had holo-Rimmer's diary. What a slashfest that would have been, if it had been stet! But of course, holo-Rimmer had no reason to know what was up with the viruses.

Great punchup-turning-to-ohhell-turned-on... Ach, but it's Not His Rimmer!

And the last line was killer.

Most excellent!

[lady_draco]

Treeporn? Whereinhell did you get that?

*mutters* Some crazy person, definitely.

[kahvi]

Your treeporn line helped me to awesomelicious extents ma'am!

No, it isn't his Rimmer, is it? But writing this made me realize that it's not as simple as all that. Heh, it's complicated as hell...

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. You helped make it happe. :)